|Reviews for And Please Don't Cry|
| katie chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
First chapter done! I cried... Great story so far.
| NotYourBitch chapter 3 . 10/6/2013
Well Phineas is gonna be pissed
| xxx chapter 3 . 9/11/2013
more more more! i love this story ... it's just so sad to see the two of them
| mudkiprox chapter 3 . 9/30/2012
I would really really like it if you continued this story! It's heartbreaking, I can feel myself tearing up as I read so you need to give it resolution. Hope this is continued.
| WaffleNommer chapter 3 . 9/7/2012
More story? O_O I like more story. OwO
| PerpetualHollow chapter 3 . 7/26/2012
I hope to whatever higher power out there that 'hiatus' means just that and not in placement of discontinued, because I really enjoy the story so far. It's difficult to find well written and in depth stories such as this one in this category and with my one of my favorite pairings no less.
Eagerly waiting for more,
| RadiantWaterfalls chapter 3 . 1/30/2012
Please write more!
| Lilac01 chapter 3 . 1/22/2012
This is an amazing story! I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon.
| kelly chapter 3 . 11/25/2011
i love this story, please keep writting
| PhineasFlynns chapter 3 . 8/21/2011
I LAV! I LAV LAV LAV! I cant wait for morrreeeee!
| hana-to-mame chapter 2 . 8/13/2011
Wow! I really love this! Hope you write more soon :D
| Amante Delle Arti chapter 2 . 8/11/2011
...Well shit ;; Continue? S'il vous plait?
| Charlotte K chapter 2 . 7/21/2011
that was a really good one!
| menolikey chapter 2 . 7/20/2011
Oh sweet dead parents of Batman. Awwwwwies!
When, I read chapter 2 and then listened to the song (which is awesome) and came back to realize that there was only 2 chapters so far, I was just like "That's it!"
In all seriousness though (and this story is pretty serious): Wow. I mean a lot of other angsty stuff is all about excessive self-pity and blah blah blah, which I enjoy as much as the next person, but yours was different (in a very, very good way). Instead of an orgy of visceral sadness, your story sounded like moths to a flame type of thing, like they wanted the light/warmth but they burnt to touch it.
Sorry -nah, nevermind I'm not sorry so damn my neighbor's birds to hell if I sound a little pompous there, but yea, fan of your story! Also, I must have a sadistic streak since I love reading about how two people can't be together (yet! -hopefully), but try and try.
Oh and sometimes your sentences confuse me mostly because I'm not sure if a verb is a verb or when I'm not sure who is doing what, like "The thought that his injury from hitting me is enough does not run thought my mind" (from ch2 somewhere in the middle). I'm not sure if his mind was thinking this or something and the 'does' isn't supposed to be there. But whatever, you don't have to listen to a hypocrite like me (I screw up -without the intention of repair- way, way worse and more often).
But I love a lot of what you wrote too (your writing is very fluid)! Like "the comforting hand placed on his shoulder burnt hell into his soul" yea, that was really (really!) good. My bad, if quoting you is a bit weird, but you have no idea how delicious it is to find stuff like that! -or maybe you do? (Here's another one: "the stench of betrayal reeks off the tension in the air"!)
As you can tell by my ranting: Looking forward to next chapter!
| TsumetaiYuuki chapter 2 . 7/14/2011
Interesting story. I like how you show the emotions and the character portrayal.
I'd love to see more, thanks for the story.