Reviews for Fourteen Hours
Kuroneko388 chapter 10 . 11/16/2011
Luvd the story. Didn't know that little interesting tidbit about Bowie's eyes.

Would u b willing to do another Labyrinth xover?

I do luv xover fanfics, I like to c what the writer comes up with. And that the characters aren't OOC or anything.

Can't wait to c what u come up with next :)
Vilinye chapter 10 . 11/15/2011
Aw, poor girls. But the last bit made me laugh.
My Beautiful Ending chapter 10 . 11/15/2011
*AHHHHHH***** dies in awe. i cannot. i have lost the ability to can. i missed this story so much! now i must read the next chapter! *Scurries off*
Vilinye chapter 9 . 9/11/2011
It'll be okay, cause you'd never trap her there.
My Beautiful Ending chapter 9 . 9/11/2011
THIS STORY IS SO BOSS I HAVE NO WORDS FOR IT. I might die soon without another chapter. this is super amazing. i love it. LOVE EVERYTHING. I JUST HAVE A LOT OF FEELINGSSSSSSSSSSSSS XD PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!
Vilinye chapter 8 . 8/31/2011
Good to see a new section, even if I still haven't watched the movie
My Beautiful Ending chapter 8 . 8/31/2011
You know i wondered about that for a while, how Garace and Tegan could just waltz off in the TARDIS, but i figured to get the story started there had to be a plot hole or two, but no. THERE REALLY IS A REASON AND IT"S AN AWESOME REASON AND THIS STORY IS THE BOMB dot COM! XD XD XD AH LURVE IT! XD
Vilinye chapter 7 . 8/23/2011
Interesting
My Beautiful Ending chapter 7 . 8/22/2011
Silly Jareth. Companions are for the Doctor! awesome chapter. Hope you had a rockin' mission trip! XD I've never been on one, but i really want to next year. it's legit business. :D hope you post the next chapter soon! :D
My Beautiful Ending chapter 6 . 7/26/2011
lol! I think Garace, at some point, should be like, 'um, Rude!' to the Doctor. there are some occasions where he deserves it in this chapter.

In this movie I have always waffled between viewing Jareth as a really cool dude and a creeper who steals babies. He's sort of more a creeper in this, but it's hilarious so I don't mind a bit. :D
Vilinye chapter 6 . 7/26/2011
And why doesn't that surprise me...
My Beautiful Ending chapter 5 . 7/17/2011
Did I tell you that I randomly got this movie for my birthday? I'm planning on watching it when y'all finish this and imagining your story alongside the real one.

And the firies used to and still do CREEP THE HECK OUT OF ME! i mean what was their point, seriously? the musicdetaching body parts trying to pull of other body parts ONE CREEPY SECTION. (i plan on skipping that bit) but looking forward to what happens to Tegan. and Garace! I love you Garace! *gives big hug to Garace*

please update this wonderful creation soon!

(I love dufflepuds XD the idea of them, not the way they repeat.)
Vilinye chapter 5 . 7/17/2011
Unsolid ground is very not good
InternMaureenFromNightVale chapter 5 . 7/17/2011
Dun dun duuuuuuuun!

I love it! Especially the Hoodwinked reference! Love that movie...Anyway, this is a fantastic story and I can't wait for the next chapter! They should've used this as an episode(s)

Btw, my pen name used to be DancingQueen411 :)

Update soon!
Vilinye chapter 4 . 7/12/2011
I haven't seen the movie, but poor poor Ludo anyway
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