Reviews for Fur Fighters
xCaptainBlaze chapter 2 . 6/4/2012
Needs a clean-up on grammar and spelling. Try to use capital letters for names and places, and in quotations use a comma or a full stop. For example:

"He went that way," said the boy.


The boy said, "He went that way."

A good basis for a story but needs plot development and more descriptive writing about the current scene.