Reviews for Rekindle and Release
palad1n chapter 8 . 3/26/2013
hmm, the third-person point of view is allright. i think you don't have to write it in italics, unless you include it with the usual Mokou-Kaguya narration. by the way, i got to see Sakuya! that really made my day.

well, i'm waiting for the next chapter. please update!
Skwrl chapter 8 . 11/17/2012
I really like your style of writing :3
Your portrayal of all the characters is good and solid, and you describe their actions well.
I'd love to read more, so please update soon!
Guest chapter 2 . 8/4/2012
Hah, Kaguya the airhead. I somehow suspected that she wouldn't remember Mokou, and I got it right! And I believe that Eirin has some words of advice and warning to give out...
I hope we'll also eventually get to see some later events, just before IN, of just after it, but that I'll see in the later chapters
Good job, I hope you'll keep on writing
Skwrl chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
Hmm, this seems very interesting! I'm really looking forward to the rivals' first meeting. Keep up the good work
Azure Xuchilbara chapter 7 . 2/12/2012
You can never fully trust a certain Inaba...Her allegiance is to no one it seems (just like in the majority of fanon works)...

Great job on the emotional displays here, especially near the end...
Ascoeur chapter 6 . 2/5/2012
OMG YESSSS! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR AN UPDATE FOREVER!

Well, actually, it hasn't been that long, but it sure felt like it has!

You always leave me in suspense~~~! What was Kaguya shouting at the end? I MUST KNOW!

UPDATE SOON, PRETTY PLEASE :3! ! ! !
Azure Xuchilbara chapter 6 . 2/5/2012
I have actually read a doujin of Mokou befriending the man she killed to get the Hourai Elixir in a fan doujin...

She had double doubts, but revenge and vengeance one against friendship and trust...

Man, Mokou is nuttier than Kaguya in my option...WAY up the fruit ladder in more ways than one, since she is often portrayed being underhanded and villainous in fan comics just so she could kill Kaguya...

Oh, and she also had this twisted love for the moon princess, with Keine just being the replacement for said love...

*shudders*

That said, this was a wonderful and awesome chapter...Excellent job on the emotions too...
Ascoeur chapter 5 . 1/29/2012
THE STORY IS GREAT! PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN~! I'M IN SUSPENSE!

_/
Ascoeur chapter 4 . 1/29/2012
I think bored Kaguya is boring too :P

ONTO THE NEXT ONE~! the last one... ;_; (thus far)
Ascoeur chapter 3 . 1/29/2012
Kaguya is so cute :3
Ascoeur chapter 2 . 1/29/2012
Still awesome. ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!
Ascoeur chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
OMG, just read the first chap! I'm LOVING it so far! I wonder how Mokou and Kaguya will react upon their encounter. This should bring a spark into their lives.
I-En-Tee-Jay chapter 5 . 11/18/2011
Considering Mokou was a thousand years old in your story, I would've thought that she would've already known how to create spellcards and stuff. It's very good drama though and how you contrast the power difference and characterisation of Mokou and Kaguya is really nicely done.

Great story, looking forward to updates.
Azure Xuchilbara chapter 5 . 10/3/2011
Impressive overall work in this chapter...

One could never trust a certain lucky Inaba on any situation~
ultra-violet-box chapter 5 . 10/3/2011
This is going to end badly, isn't it...
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