Reviews for Unforgettable
KaylaRafter chapter 8 . 12/27/2013
Write more pls
adi-dion chapter 8 . 4/18/2012
Wow I love it, so sad and heartbreaking!

I'm really looking forward to read the rest of this fic :3
c.smith123 chapter 8 . 1/29/2012
I really, really hope so too 3 Amazing writing, such a sad story though. Gave me so many shivers! Xxx
Ash chapter 7 . 9/12/2011
This story makes me feel all mushy inside... loves it, hanging on for another update!
bubbles799 chapter 6 . 9/5/2011
Wow, that's a really big time jump. And often when people write a time jump like that in, they lose the plot. But judging by the way you've written this chapter, I believe you aren't one of those that lose it.

Excellent!
bubbles799 chapter 5 . 8/26/2011
Are you trying to make your readers cry? Because I really wanted to! But then everyone around me in the resort cafe would have looked at me weirdly... And I would have had to have blamed you!

So heartbreaking. Loved the descriptive words.

Well done.
bubbles799 chapter 4 . 8/14/2011
I'm so sorry for late reviews. I've been sick, and away. And basically... reviews just haven't happened. My apologies.

This was a brilliant chapter. Unexpected, but nevertheless very good.

Great work.
bubbles799 chapter 3 . 7/19/2011
It's all so tense! You're writing it really well.

I'm really torn as to which path you'll take with this, but I'm really looking forward to finding out.

Great job!
Sarah chapter 3 . 7/15/2011
Woo u updated and I am reviewing...

(I haven't reviewed in ages)

Harry Potter was awesome! I was still excited at like 9:00pm the following night...until i was sent to bed...:(

Anyway great chapter...

I like this story :)
Emzi1996 chapter 2 . 7/7/2011
more please
bubbles799 chapter 2 . 6/24/2011
You're really getting into the story. You've got the plot going, love it.

Loved all your little things about Jake (beating the cops, never having driven that fast except when Rachel was in labour etc)

Great update!
c.smith123 chapter 2 . 6/23/2011
OMG. MORE MORE MORE MORE... please? Cannot wait for more updates, cannot wait to see their reactions, cannot wait for more updates! Please update soon! Xoxox love always, Claudia. :)
c.smith123 chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
Wow. I haven't read all your other updates yet since I haven't been able to get on the Internet but after seeing this pop up in my inbox, I had to read it first! How amazing! Okay, has she been kidnapped or just tab away? Poor Rach, she'd be hysterical. Please update really soon! Love always, Claudia. Xoxox PS I can't read the others now but will do so on the weekend maybe?
bubbles799 chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
I have been checking the fan fic site for days because I was sure you had said you had posted this... but I couldn't find it! I have no idea why, and I promise I wasn't ignoring it.

And that's cruel, ending it there. And that means we want to read more.

Good luck with more!
GinFizz130 chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
Really looking forward to seeing how this story develops. Looks like a tearjerker ahead!