|Reviews for Rise of the Uchiha|
| adrian11 chapter 39 . 22h ago
I see what you did. " 'Maro ", marrow? Gold.
| Death Sender chapter 39 . 3/16
just went through all your chapters in the last 5 hours and i have to say it was a good 5 hours. lpve the story hope you update soon. One thing i have to say is that no matter how you play out the forest of death without anko being the proctor its just not the same and where is anko in the story. again love the story
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/15
Sopas back no joke please sign
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/15
Please spead word and sign sopa back we need to hurry
| SuperGota chapter 39 . 3/15
This was an interesting chapter, but I really don't think this is how the battle should have gone. I have a few concerns with it.
Firstly, the fact that Sakura defeated Kabuto boggles the mind, and it's not because I think Sakura is weak or anything like that...I hate to say it, but in most fanfiction I've read, my complaint is usually that Sakura is presented as too weak, but in this case, Kabuto is the one being presented as too weak. While I can concede that Hinata's statement is just her perspective, I find that the actual battle in which Sakura somehow defeated a jounin level shinobi, Orochimaru's right-hand man, to be rather astonishing.
If you don't care much for canon, so be it, but if you do, then remember that Kabuto was assessed by Orochimaru and Jiraiya to be equal to Kakashi. Even Kakashi himself was spurred to train more after getting fooled by Kakashi at the hospital. This is the man who nearly defeated Tsunade, who acclimatized to his disrupted nerves mid-battle, and fought both Naruto and Shizune (another jounin-level shinobi) afterwards, nearly winning except for Naruto's sacrificial grapple. And he did all this while supporting Orochimaru's summons. But most importantly...his regenerative ability was not very important until he was actually defeated by Naruto, but in your story you make it sound like he's reliant on it. Let's also not forget that Tsunade is one of the greatest taijutsu-oriented shinobi out there, no doubt superior to whatever boost Sakura got from the venom, yet Kabuto held his own against her and landed a number of disabling (actually incapacitating, for a less ninja) attacks after using a Military Rations Pill, prior to using the blood trick, actually causing Tsunade to admit in her mind that he may have superior senses and ability than her in her prime. I could go on about Kabuto's various other exploits, such as in Chapter 89, where he killed numerous ANBU members easily. The point is, he shouldn't have been overwhelmed by Sakura's speed like that, he should've instantly analyzed and rethought his tactics after realizing something was different from his data on her, and immediately responded by 1) using a soldier pill to boost his physical abilities, 2) using Hiding like a Mole to stall and make other preparations, 3) using Genjutsu to buy time and keep distance, or 4) summoning corpses via the Dead Soul technique to fight for him (this is not the Edo-Tensei technique, this is the technique he used to trick Kakashi at the hospital, and to directly fight in the Three-Tails arc. He was shown to carry a scroll full of corpses for this purpose in the beginning of Part II). Orochimaru doesn't need Kabuto merely for his medical abilities or skill with specific advanced jutsu, you know. He had observed Kabuto even from a young age, because he saw great potential in him, and that potential was proven numerous times until he actually became a major villain in the end. Is Sakura and the scorpion clan really strong enough to defeat him?
Secondly, it is unbelievable to me that Kimimaro started ranting about the Oto pride, and showing his rage at Gaara cutting of Dosu's team's ears, and THEN proceed to just let him go without a fight, being content to fight against the ones who stayed behind. Don't just describe him as being angry and put angry words in his mouth, show it in his actions. Make him attack Gaara instead of just standing around, and show the scene where the team stops him from pursuing.
Thirdly, your description of that blast seal Hinata used made it sound like the explosive force circumvented the armor and hit the chest directly, packing enough power to blow the entirely of the body away several meters, which to me doesn't sound like something that causes mere unconsciousness, but actually death by a destroyed chest.
Finally, this is the first time I've actually reviewed your story so I may as well include some general comments beyond combat mechanics. Although I enjoy your attention to the numerous changes that would occur from the initial divergence point in the story, your focus might be too broad, and as such a pace of the plot is rather slow. You're getting bogged down by fights and other events that have no particular significance to the plot as a whole, and/or don't involve the main characters you list, Naruto and Sasuke. Other than that, your writing style is pretty good.
| Scandalist chapter 39 . 3/15
Sooo glad this chapter is finally released: this fanfic is getting sexier and sexier.
I'm probably gonna make a shoutout of your fanfic in my next chapter, you know, just as a "thank you" for all of your work.
| ijpowers92 chapter 39 . 3/15
ok. Sakura is awesome.
I almost feel bad for Kabuto, being reduced to the team but-monkey.
| Thanasi chapter 39 . 3/15
Ugh I dont really know how to explain the problem with this story. The premise is fucking awesome... i genuinely love it and I really like the idea of Naruto kicking ass as an Uchiha and an important person in his village... What i really really dislike is how prominent the ensemble cast is... When most people read a story they like to see their main characters more then the rest of the characters... but here we are getting too much from all sides... its nice but it turns me off from reading cause I care about 200x more about whats going on with Naruto rather then sandstorm or oto or hinata or whoever else is involved. At the end of the day the story just isnt focused enough for me and I am having a really hard time bothering to read the updates when less then half the story has naruto in it.
It wouldnt be a bad story for a novel, but for a fanfiction its kinda hard to enjoy. I especially hated the mist arc but meh you cant really stop what your doing and i doubt you'd want to. I can't help but think that this story would be much more popular if it focused more on one or two characters rather then all the characters!
| Fleetfox chapter 39 . 3/15
I thought that Kabuto was as strong as Kakashi but still nice chapter
| Turambar - Turun Ambartanen chapter 39 . 3/15
I'm actually surprised none of Deidara's little creations blew up at all.
Good work here! I liked the fights.
| razzi2010 chapter 38 . 3/15
Awesome story ! Didn't like that it took so long to get into the swing of things but I suppose a lot of plans did need to be set up. Aside from that I can't wait till the next chapter is out :)
| randomreader11 chapter 23 . 3/8
There are five elements in the naruto universe.
| Guest chapter 32 . 2/27
I do like how you set up the Kiri rebellion, and how you shone a new light onto Zabuzas personality to what he may have done had he lived longer in canon. The teamwork of Team Missing-nin and Sanfstorm was fun to read as well through all the fights, laughs, and long monologues. Finally I like how you portrayed the Uchiha brothers as on this story they're both avengers and unlike in the canon Itachi has to rely on his Anbu skills to survive and not the Mangekyou like he used in the canon. Continue to write as this is a great read and I can say that I'm probably not the only one looking forward to the next chapter.
| Guest chapter 32 . 2/27
I would like to see Obito appear as if he never died, and wants to liberate Konoha to show that not all Uchiha are truly evil.
Also, this story was great so far, as even though many bits of info contradicts canon, I can still imagine that happening if Itachi didn't massacre the clan and the Uchihas coup was successful. Loved Hinatas confidence due to the enslavement of the village, and the Kiri rebellion. It really showed a perspective that Zabuza might have shown in canon had he lived longer and the teamwork of Team Missing-nin. Also the Uchiha avenger mindset, opposed to canon with just Sasuke on that track, it's both Saduke and Itachi. Finally, I like how you showcased Itachis ability because while in canon he was always known as the mass murderer with a Mangekyou, he was never forced to rely on his Anbu skills to survive, with the power he held. Anyways the story has been great so far, continue to write, as I'm sure I can say that I'm not the only one looking forward to the next chapter.
| KyuubiWindscar chapter 38 . 2/18
Took a while but I finally finished what was already written of this one. Not entirely awake at the moment so I don't have any biting critiques from any of the arcs, and I never read the previous Naruto/Kimimaro fight so I don't know how or why it was so bad. In any case, looking forward to Ch39 at some point.