Reviews for Rise of the Uchiha |
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Rock lee chapter 15 . 7/8/2019 Dude or dudette I freakin love this I'm in heaven reading it |
Rock lee chapter 11 . 7/8/2019 Naruto:jeez I'm smart Sakura and Sasuke:you are the dumbest person ever Nine tailed fox:you have ten seconds to run before I kill you both *sakura and sasuke run faster than the flash* Me:*sigh* I'll go get the shovel |
Rock lee chapter 6 . 7/8/2019 I freaking love this you need an award for this here have this |
Yo chapter 1 . 4/20/2019 Your mother was raped. The cunt loved a good dicking. She'll probably be thinking of cocks before she dies. Hopefully you drop dead on a toilet, she piece of shit. |
jhAMES chapter 47 . 3/21/2019 At least this trash seems to have been abandoned. Only good thing I can say. |
UTTER FUCKING chapter 43 . 3/21/2019 TRASH. NOT GONNA SAY ANYTHING - WORST STORY I HAVE EVER READ, KILL YOURSELF. STAY STUCK IN 1000 FAVS, CUNT |
Fuck you chapter 28 . 3/21/2019 Nobody gives a fuck about characters other than naruto, you stupid cunt. Slit your throat and die. |
Jindosh chapter 23 . 3/21/2019 Is Naruto still alive? He hasnt appeared in 3 chapters |
Moorin Vales chapter 2 . 10/30/2018 Is it weird I’m sided with the Uchihas? |
TheChairIsAgainstTheWall chapter 47 . 9/22/2018 This story is totally awsome. I got into Naruto from fanfiction, and have real desire to watch the anime, because Madara seems to be a idiotic nutcase. But in this story, he actually has sane-ish motives! The fight scenes, the "Mirror, Mirror" inversion of characters, the ridiculous gambit-pileup at the Chunin Exams… wonderful. Please finish this! It's too amazing to let die! Followed and fav'ed! |
shadowmere388 chapter 47 . 9/16/2018 I certainly enjoyed this, the main theme was good and you are a talented writer, but you do have room for improvement, your fight scenes often encompass characters making decisions that do not make sense, or simply doing nothing when they can do a lot more, deidara not using his bombs that can enter blood streams for example. Also, some of the logic that you try to display doesn't work, and radically changes the story because of it. Overall though, well done, I hope you continue to update |
You fucking suck chapter 19 . 9/11/2018 Your Jiraiya is as much a traitor as the Uchiha, and for Christ's sake you're making me root for Madara of all people!. You need to work on your storytelling skills you hack. This fucking story is as awful as the shit VFsnake comes up with. You should check him out, maybe you can compare notes on how to make a story suck donkey balls. |
Rainstrom chapter 2 . 8/7/2018 I wonder who Madara really is- it makes way more sense for him to be Tobito, than the actual Madara. I suppose we'll see... It could just as easily be the actual Madara, resurrected via Edo Tensei. The mask for hiding the cracks.. Hmm. Awesome story. |
Utopia Empire chapter 5 . 3/10/2018 THIS FIC IS AMAZING! HOW you develop the characters...how smooth everything is just because itachi didn't kill the clan. I would beg you please update this fic again, and hopefully you can finish it. |
Uzumaki no Rinne-Sennin chapter 47 . 2/12/2018 This fic is a pure pieceof art! It's one of the best AU that I've read! I really like this Madara, though, I wonder what happened to Zetsu? You have never mentioned it. I only hope that you hadn't abandoned this story and we can read till the end! And the NaruHina in this fic is absolutely interesting, I really really want to see its conclusion. |