Reviews for The Breakers
VryUnique chapter 33 . 2/4
Ugh. I wanted to hear what the letter said. If I had to guess I would say
they would like to meet her. I do think Bella's letter should have said more,
at least telling her what was in Peyton's letter.
VryUnique chapter 30 . 2/4
Awesome story! I'm glad Edward got his happily ever after. I just wish
his grandfather was alive to see it.
I wonder what happened to Evan's parents. I'm sure they blame Bella
for their sons death. They wanted their son to be a doctor and now Bella
has married a lawyer. I bet they would hate that.
Thanks for sharing.
VryUnique chapter 5 . 2/3
Hopefully we will get to hear what happened in the kitchen in the next chapter.
I want see Bella's reaction when Peyton tells her that Edward is her best friend.
Charlie was pretty rough on Edward. I understand him being cautious but there
was no reason to almost break his hand. I'm feeling a little sorry for Edward with
all the scrutiny he has been under. Carlisle and Esme is really the only ones who
have greeted him without all the extra posturing. I did wonder if Edward was somehow
going to end up being Carlisle and Esme's son. We haven't heart what happened to
Edward's parents and I guess he could have been adopted. Though, the Cullens
being young teenagers that had to give up their child seems unlikely. Edward said
Wayne was in his fifties and Carlisle went to college with him so they were definitely
adults when Edward was born. Wayne's reaction to the Cullens made me think there
might be a connection or it was where the money came from. It's possible that his
reaction was because the Cullens suffered tragedy, lost a child or maybe where never
able to conceive.
VryUnique chapter 4 . 2/3
Edward probably thinks Bella knows he came from prison. We also got
some more clues, at least on Edward's appearance. I wonder if the scar
on his neck is from the night that changed his life or if he received it in
prison. The tattoos and how rough looking he was were a surprise. I know
prison could roughen you but I guess he I figured he was more clean cut
before that, wanting to be a lawyer. Life has really thrown him for some
loops and sounds like not all fault of his own. Bella will probably feel bad
for judging a book by its cover. I wonder how Peyton has already met him.
VryUnique chapter 3 . 2/3
I'm curious about Edward's age. He has been in jail for 7 years and the
last time he had a beer he was underage but he has also passed the bar.
Did he pass the bar in jail? That's the only explanation I can come up with
unless he was a child genius and finished everything early. I believe you
can get a law degree in jail but I don't think you can take the bar.
VryUnique chapter 2 . 2/2
I wonder who did what for Edward to end up in jail. It sounds like he got
a raw deal.
VryUnique chapter 1 . 2/2
I can't imagine Edward is going to die. I can't wait to see what happens.
Mona69 chapter 33 . 7/6/2024
Love the story. The angst was great.
Mona69 chapter 17 . 7/4/2024
The prologue is what got me worried.
Cullen Cousin chapter 33 . 3/28/2024
good story
Mystylight chapter 11 . 8/17/2023
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saintfudge chapter 2 . 10/28/2022
This is one of my favs….I just went for the re read ..yes I did. Miss this family ..thanks again for sharing ..have fun
Daire123 chapter 33 . 2/15/2022
I LOVE LOVE Love this story! I picked this thinking about how different and unique it sounded but I had a hard time putting my phone down and finding out what happened next for Edward. Such a hard life and then thankfully he had the 2nd chance so many people never get to experience where he found where he belonged. Such a kind inspirational story! I can’t wait to read more of your work! Thanks for sharing!
Guest chapter 25 . 1/10/2022
Why didn't they ask Bella for the guy's description? Duh! That's a huge plot hole.
Patriciadiane chapter 31 . 1/10/2022
thank you
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