Reviews for The Breakers |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ugh. I wanted to hear what the letter said. If I had to guess I would say they would like to meet her. I do think Bella's letter should have said more, at least telling her what was in Peyton's letter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! I'm glad Edward got his happily ever after. I just wish his grandfather was alive to see it. I wonder what happened to Evan's parents. I'm sure they blame Bella for their sons death. They wanted their son to be a doctor and now Bella has married a lawyer. I bet they would hate that. Thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hopefully we will get to hear what happened in the kitchen in the next chapter. I want see Bella's reaction when Peyton tells her that Edward is her best friend. Charlie was pretty rough on Edward. I understand him being cautious but there was no reason to almost break his hand. I'm feeling a little sorry for Edward with all the scrutiny he has been under. Carlisle and Esme is really the only ones who have greeted him without all the extra posturing. I did wonder if Edward was somehow going to end up being Carlisle and Esme's son. We haven't heart what happened to Edward's parents and I guess he could have been adopted. Though, the Cullens being young teenagers that had to give up their child seems unlikely. Edward said Wayne was in his fifties and Carlisle went to college with him so they were definitely adults when Edward was born. Wayne's reaction to the Cullens made me think there might be a connection or it was where the money came from. It's possible that his reaction was because the Cullens suffered tragedy, lost a child or maybe where never able to conceive. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Edward probably thinks Bella knows he came from prison. We also got some more clues, at least on Edward's appearance. I wonder if the scar on his neck is from the night that changed his life or if he received it in prison. The tattoos and how rough looking he was were a surprise. I know prison could roughen you but I guess he I figured he was more clean cut before that, wanting to be a lawyer. Life has really thrown him for some loops and sounds like not all fault of his own. Bella will probably feel bad for judging a book by its cover. I wonder how Peyton has already met him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm curious about Edward's age. He has been in jail for 7 years and the last time he had a beer he was underage but he has also passed the bar. Did he pass the bar in jail? That's the only explanation I can come up with unless he was a child genius and finished everything early. I believe you can get a law degree in jail but I don't think you can take the bar. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder who did what for Edward to end up in jail. It sounds like he got a raw deal. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't imagine Edward is going to die. I can't wait to see what happens. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story. The angst was great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The prologue is what got me worried. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is one of my favs….I just went for the re read ..yes I did. Miss this family ..thanks again for sharing ..have fun |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE LOVE Love this story! I picked this thinking about how different and unique it sounded but I had a hard time putting my phone down and finding out what happened next for Edward. Such a hard life and then thankfully he had the 2nd chance so many people never get to experience where he found where he belonged. Such a kind inspirational story! I can’t wait to read more of your work! Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() Why didn't they ask Bella for the guy's description? Duh! That's a huge plot hole. |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank you |