|Reviews for Proposition|
| FellIntoHisArms chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
Aww, that's so sweet,
Two guys helping each other X]
| Son Goshen chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
Hmm... this is a very interesting insight on the two characters. You did an excellent job in keeping them in character, and the image of Chobi muscle-bound made me laugh. Great one-shot!
| Fanwoman chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
I felt like trying some Akimichi fic, and this caught my eye. It's a little bit hasty and convenient, but it's also really cute. I like them both just the way they are, but there's nothing wrong with putting a bit more thought and effort into one's appearance. Add Shino to the group, and you'd have the trifecta of Rookies who unintentionally keep the girls at bay. ;)
Thank you for a charming story!
| Kakarot Son chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
Ha! Quite interesting, little dabble there. Not much to say, but obviously well written, though the plot was quite thin in a few places (How the hell do I talk about a one-shot? I'm used to reviewing multi-chapter fics), but yeah pretty awesome.
| theabominablesnowmansassfur chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
That was REALLY cute, love it!
| pyr0technic chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
That's quite interesting :D