|Reviews for Power of the Zodiac|
| Ariewolf17 chapter 1 . 8/26
Nicely written, though could you add a little more detail?
| invisibelle chapter 1 . 6/21
Your length is awesome.
I love your writer's voice!
Try to replace 'said' with others. (spat, replied, invoked, screeched, muttered, as well as literal tons of online dictionaries and thesauruses)
Two more things: your writing seems to follow the dialogue pattern. He said, she said, he replied, ad infinitum. Try to either replace dialogue with descriptions of the character's/s' actions or intersperse sensory details in a good 'break' spot.
The last thing: OC is an acronym for 'original character'. The redundancy in multiple summaries of your fics turned me away at first, and, while I am glad I clicked, many readers won't, simply because of that. What can I say? We're surprisingly picky. Thanks for writing.
| Guest chapter 29 . 6/24/2014
There are 12 zodiac signs
| little miss jolie chapter 29 . 6/5/2013
I really love this story! Please continue this, but if you are done with it, be sure to change it to 'complete'.
| sabrina-luna-potter chapter 29 . 11/27/2012
I love this story, you really need to continue it, it's amazing.
| KKotss chapter 29 . 5/28/2012
well that was awesome it was really good
| MistWolf-Runner chapter 29 . 1/25/2012
Really interesting story! Gr8t! ;3
| Emma chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
| cc chapter 15 . 11/6/2011
love your story. could you like put up a character list on the new mages with their powers because i can't remember who is who. other than that i absolutley love your story.
| RedRoseBlade chapter 17 . 8/25/2011
Awesome Chapter! I'd advise you to break up your paragraphs though.
| Mistyx7 chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
Good, but emily wears her jewel on a bracelet, not a necklace.
| Mistyx7 chapter 29 . 8/7/2011
I really like this story. It is my favourites list. can you please make a story where kara suddenly skips to level ten? It would be payback for when adiane teases Kara. can you please make a story like that? it would be an awsome story.
| Feathersky chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
I like it, it's really good. Keep it up!
| Soozie Quixotic chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
I don't normally like Avalon fics about OCs, but your writing is really good. If you skipped a line after each paragraph, it would be easier to read, but at least it's not all one giant paragraph lol. The canon characters are in-character (especially Kara's friends), though a few lines of dialogue seem a bit too formal. The new mages don't seem like clones of the canon mages (that's a huge pet peeve of mine XD), so I'm looking forward to what's next.
Holy crap, I just realized that you've already posted fifteen chapters! Guess I won't have to wait, then.