Reviews for Dreaming and Breathing
Sailaranel chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
Such a mournful piece!
I can imagine the love she had for her David, and the agony she's felt for the last five years. But in her rememberings of him, I loved the line- "It's time to wake up." and how she then moves to the brochure. The tiny steps to living again, all the while remembering. Very precious
flutterfli chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
Hey, Rach. I'm sorry I've not responded to your story yet. I am so touched, tears are running down my cheeks. I know that most of your stories written have a meaning or person's trama behind them. I feel like I have missed something critical with the girls. One of the reasons this story affected me so much is that I've been depressed for so long. I have pulled away from everyone and I miss them greatly. I know your story is about living in the present and to stop holding on to the things that bring them on. I can just imagine how I would react if Edward had showed up in my bedroom. I would have to get at least one hug from him though. LOL Thanks for sharing that there is hope out there and to just let go and live. As always it is your beautiful words, caring thoughts, love, and soul that shine through to reach us and make us think. I hope to get to chat soon. Love ya! Carol
Edward's Eternal chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
Oh my friend... this one brought tears to my eyes...

How extraordinarily lovely. Well done !
k80cue chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
Hi

I love this story - I must admit that I was a bit confused in the beginning, but when I realised what was happening I liked the fact that they were both helping the other to get their lives back on track.
dazzleglo chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
OMG, this was fabulous, I don't even know where to begin it was so sweet and it made me cry. They both got something out of it. It gave Edward new insight into his Bella and a memory of his mom, and now Elizabeth is going to be able to move on. You so should do a companion piece to this of when Edward goes back and his thoughts on what it was like to hear Bella's mind from the reading of Twilight.
EdwardsGirl10 chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
Wow! That wasn't a story, that was an incredible experience! Very heartfelt and interesting.
Camilla10 chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
Very moving, if a little puzzling. I hope Edward got back to where he belonged.