|Reviews for The Blonde Girl|
| greeneyesCutie chapter 2 . 6/24/2013
| greeneyesCutie chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
Very good start
| sillymeowmeow chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
I really like this story
| shtoops chapter 4 . 3/27/2013
I found what I believe is a mistake. When Rose originally asked the Doctor who he was in her first TV episode, she said "Doctor, Doctor What?" You have her saying "Doctor Who". I feel it is small details like that that could make this better.
| love-wizardhobbit chapter 7 . 3/5/2013
Loving this story so far.. I know that I am a bit late and you are in like your sequel but I loved this first rose adventure.. She is so awesome :) I look forward to the rest of the story and the sequel
| BewareOfFlyingMonkeys chapter 13 . 2/4/2013
I think your characters need more flaws but I love the end of this chapter
| BewareOfFlyingMonkeys chapter 5 . 2/3/2013
I think Rose sounds too much like an adult but this story is really interesting!
| Elma Trisara chapter 26 . 1/28/2013
| teh-ena chapter 26 . 1/27/2013
I really enjoyed reading this story! I love the idea that Rose could have turned out so differently. I think that you've captured this new Rose very well, though. I haven't seen the Sarah Jane Adventures, but I found all of these adventures to be very exciting and entertaining! I got very attached to Eve, but I really enjoyed the appearance of Lumen! That was great! Also, I loved the mystery of the two strange men. It had me stumped for a while, but after the white one came in I'm pretty sure I have a good idea of who they are now. I can't wait to find out what else you have in store for Rose and how these changes affect the stories that we know from canon.
| BananasPearsApples chapter 26 . 1/20/2013
I am currently squealing in excitement. This story has so much potential. I am going to start reading the sequels now!
As you predicted, I am one of the readers who fell in love with Eve. I loved the SJA episode she was in, but this was even better! Thank you for bringing her back in this wonderful story.
You are an absolutely brilliant writer! (And I love your cliffhangers).
| Um. Fish chapter 3 . 12/13/2012
Hah! I was just wondering when the Doctor would show up!
| SeasonsInReverse chapter 26 . 12/3/2012
Excellent story; unique and extremely enjoyable to read! There were a few typos, a few false starts in terms of past and present tenses, but nothing a proof read wouldn't fix. Greatly looking forward to the sequel!
| Nostalgic Beauty chapter 26 . 11/23/2012
This is quite interesting. You've hinted that some things are going to be the same. I wonder if Rose is going to travel with the Doctor like she did in canon.
| I has a cheese burger chapter 26 . 10/21/2012
i love it!
| Moo Chapman chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
Read this on LJ.