Reviews for Ancestral Obligation
BenoitRen chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
I like how you characterise Rhys. It's very much like how I'd imagine him being from what little the game tells us about him.

While your weaving of flashbacks into the first part of the story isn't bad (I appreciate it, actually), it'd be nice to have a change once in a while.

Finally, I think you went a bit overboard in this story with the use of so many game quotes. It feels unoriginal.

I don't want to end this review on a negative note, so: thumbs up! ;)