Reviews for Heartbeat
ohsosirius chapter 1 . 2/12
i really liked it :)
Guest chapter 1 . 8/7/2014
Fantastic! You had my heartbeat mounting with every line! Give us more! :)
a chapter 1 . 7/25/2014
Very good smut
caribbeanblues chapter 1 . 7/15/2014
This is amazing. I rarely read smut because I don't like how people write it, especially when it comes to James/Lily. But you did a really great job.
horsegirl275 chapter 1 . 2/20/2014
Fantastic for a first time writing smut, just fantastic in general!
Kathleen Kelly chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
This is perfect. Tasteful smut is the best smut. And I love how you ended it with them saying "I love you". I don't know, that just feels right.
Mug chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
Good good good. I couldn't tell it was first time. :)
Guest chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
Wow. This is how you write smut, people. This is perfect. Love it.
artists chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
Hey, that was awesome. I never ever read smut, well you know, moral and ethical reasons but if you skip the smuts, it's amazing! Gonna check out you other fics for sure. xoxo Dazzled
Guest chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
dear god, that was hot!
SillyJily chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
wow. really, really, wow. I can't produce a proper compliment because my mind is still reeling from that perfection
Nezie chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
shiny ruby chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
I have severe moral qualms about reviewing smut because in my mind it just kind of reinforces the thing that, Yes you do read smut and you have an alarmingly unhealthy obsession with it... Im weird like that but anyways... Good job!
papercranesandplanes chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
Well... That was brilliant! I avoid smut like plague, but I like this story. Usually, in the smut stories, people exaggerate and you can find threesomes, group rape or completely pornographic stuff... It's gross! Like, this is James and Lily, two people who made Harry Potter, the savior of the wizarding world and the epitome of love. They loved each other, so even when they're just having a quick shag, it has to be with feelings. Or, that's how I see it.
Anyway, you did a great job. ;)
hanihami chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
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