|Reviews for Eden|
| Mashkai30 chapter 1 . 3/1
I have enjoyed this very much. I hope you find time to finish it someday as I would love to read the ending:)
| Death'sSymphony chapter 4 . 2/25
I so love reading your style. It keeps me on scrolling the page down and anticipating the next set of words :))
I so love your fic, very nice. I can't wait for the more fluffy (if you could even call it that, this is Voldemort we're talking about) part of Harry and Voldemort's interactions.
Waiting eargerly for your next chappy!
| solsere chapter 4 . 2/15
Very cool story! I love this mute!powerful!Harry. And your ideas are just so creative - the microchip in his neck, bombings, and the electromagnetic frequencies disabling magical areas, etc. just such a cool (if dark) future that awaits. I love the idea of Compatible Magic (and that there is no inbuilt attraction or compulsion, but it totally makes sense for Voldemort to interpret Harry's choice to help him/contact him about the future as something related to a future relationship or sentiments between them) and that being around Harry makes him more sane. I also really like that Harry went back in time to before his own birth - characters like Frank Longbottom are so rarely used and it's refreshing to read about them!
I know you haven't updated in awhile, but I hope you do get inspiration to start this story again.
| Anaelyssa chapter 4 . 2/1
| KiraIqa chapter 4 . 1/12
Great story plot! It have me glued and reading till the last chapter. I can't wait for the next chapter to find out what more damages Harry will dole out and how he will save the wizarding world.
| TARDISbluu chapter 4 . 12/31/2013
Aw. Too bad you didn't continue this. It was quite interesting, and well-written. I kept laughing to myself at how Voldie thinks he was "involved" with Harry in the future. Ha! If only he knew. I'm cracking up right now, just thinking about it. Lol
Anyway. Nice story. Wish it were continued. :)
| TARDISbluu chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
Holy. Freaking. CRAP!
Damn! I've read some dark stuff before, but holy shit! That's got to be the most violent one I've ever read... Wow... Not that I won't keep reading, of course. Violence in writing isn't generally a deterrent for me, even if it is a... bit... gross... Lol
Interesting, so far. I see what you mean by VERY DARK, though. This is most definitely VERY DARK, and VERY violent. Oh, well.
Here's to perseverance! xD
| JIMIRMA chapter 4 . 12/30/2013
Like this uptake on destroy such stories don't give much detail on how and that even with Magic it's gonna be hard as hell to do. I think that you should have most of the order join after a few months. While they are Light a lot of them are masters and have great minds. The only problem that would stop them from joining with Dark would be Dumblebeee and you already discredited I think some of them wouldn't like the destruction of a species no mater how horrible the species is, since Light shouldn’t do such horrible Harry writes a few articles that scare them enough, and he promises that they wouldn’t have to do the dirty work if they have no wish of the so called Order would jump to it. They were prepared to fight against a Dark Lord, so they were prepared for war.
| Magenta Moon chapter 4 . 12/20/2013
More reactions of the Wizarding world would be nice. Also, will some of the Order of the Phoenix join in on the muggle slaughter?
| Insanely-Yours96 chapter 4 . 12/9/2013
"Liked this chapter," you say, as if it's possible not to.
Seriously, I adore this story- all the little details and tidbits adding together to make it interesting and believable. I certainly can't wait for some more Harry (/Dust), Voldemort interaction, I love what I've seen so far in that department! Also, I'm always salivating for a speedy update on such well-written, intriguing pieces (hint, hint).
Apologies, but I don't seem to be as creative as some of your reviewers, and can thus only offer to read this religious and fanatically.
| Daphne Whitlock-Potter chapter 4 . 11/9/2013
I am in love with this bad ass version of Harry. Time travel, smart/strong Harry add mpreg and this'd be my definition of a perfect story. Jk on the mpreg I love this thing no matter which direction you take it.
| cuteknight101 chapter 4 . 9/20/2013
| Knowledge is a powerful tool chapter 4 . 9/6/2013
| freaky bitch chapter 4 . 9/5/2013
absolutly genius! please continue writing!
| FranticHamster chapter 4 . 8/21/2013
Wow very very dark story but you did warn us.