|Reviews for Eden|
| Begumebilli chapter 4 . 4/26
Hi! Quite different plot. I know it's been too long for you but please update.
| Harrypotterishella chapter 4 . 4/20
Have harry and Bella get together and put Alice and Lilly on the dark side
| r3nlock chapter 4 . 4/11
i don't have any helpful advice or comments other than what you've written so far is wonderful and on track. it hurts that there isn't more than four chapters (kinda like reaching out to grab something only to discover your hand is gone from the wrist down [except not in the bloody gory way, if that makes any sense]). so now to follow and hunt down more of your stories...
| Fen219 chapter 4 . 2/24
I hope to read more
| fatesmask chapter 4 . 2/22
you know i had almost forgotten about this story. you should update i still like what you have done with the story either way great start
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/30
| Jinxs5 chapter 4 . 1/19
Araceil brilliant storyline... but couldn't help but notice that the last update was a few years ago. Have you: A) Abandoned this story... B) Placed this in Hiatus... or C) let someone else take over it? If C, Who? as I would very much like to continue reading this storyline as it is totally fresh idea on a very HP AU. If you have just stepped back from it then please continue with this story as I appear to not be the only one wishing for you to continue. As always with your stories a pleasure to read your talent.
Thanks for sharing.
| Lucinda Silver chapter 4 . 1/7
Hey, Autbor, um... well, I don't know if you were too boys to update or you abandoned it or someone had adopted the story without me knowing or perhaps you did post informed the readers about it and I was ignorant, okay, so um, if not all of those options I wrote when um, when will you update, Author? It has been years.
| Counting Sinful Stars chapter 4 . 1/7
This is amazing. Very amazing.
What about a spell or potion that makes muggles, especially young children, easy to sway into the magical pov? Like propaganda for muggles? Bring in young enough muggles that don't know things or have their own opinions. Then raise them to support and work for the Wizards. The muggles raised by wizards could then become spy's and insiders to other muggles. Since they have no magic, they wouldn't be identified or anything. So they can do the jobs that any magical person can't.
| Counting Sinful Stars chapter 3 . 1/7
Wow. Interesting...I like how you've come up with some of these ideas and reasons.
| Counting Sinful Stars chapter 2 . 1/7
Damn. That's awful.
| Counting Sinful Stars chapter 1 . 1/7
| iluvfairytale chapter 4 . 1/4
Okay so you somehow nullified the prejudice pure bloods have with muggle borns, but what are you going to do about the prejudice with magical creatures?
| Goatis chapter 4 . 12/23/2014
I hope you haven't stopped writing for this fic its really very interesting as far as story idea's go & I'd like to see how Harry & his new allies start implementing their world plans.
Please write some more for this soon!
| Daikuro chapter 4 . 12/13/2014
A nundu would make a great weapon, its breath would be ideal for a biological can you immagine muggles attacked by a rampaging dragon?Or a fienfyre let loose in a nuclear facility?