|Reviews for wolfgirl|
| Jennifer chapter 3 . 4/17
I enjoyed reading your plot. It grabbed my attention and I wanted to read more. I like where it is going. I miss the heroine and her mate, Jondalar both of whom I have come to love. I do like the parallels between Ayla lost and then her daughter. If I was going to critic this piece, it would be only to say this: work on your details and sentence structure. It doesn't paint a fluid picture.
| Jemjnz chapter 3 . 1/6/2015
This is a cool story and I'm interested to where the plot leads. But I must admit that chapter 1 was quite cliche of cotcb.
| NabikiB chapter 1 . 8/21/2014
Um, anyone who objects to really good world building isn't someone that can write well. If all you have is plot and there's no background or lead in or all the endless detail that makes a good story, you're pretty useless in the story telling department.
But thanks for the warning...now I'm no particular danger of a HUGE waste of my time.
| tricorvus chapter 3 . 4/11/2012
I kind of like where this is going. I'd love to see a continuation of it.
"Y u no" update?
| noMuku chapter 3 . 11/11/2011
Hmnn..I wonder whatever happened to this story?
| Soul-co chapter 2 . 7/28/2011
I kinda know what you mean :\ the series conclusion seriously disappointed me, and with all those pages basically nothing happened that wasn't already covered in the first book.
Anywho, I'm enjoying this so far, keep up the good work!