|Reviews for Ordinary Girls|
| ChronoZone chapter 14 . 10/27/2013
Woaaaaah! I'm in Cloud NINE! That was the best !
Yep, gotta close that closet door tightly this time because we definitely don't want interruptions... (If-You-Know-What-I-Mean), Yay! They're finally together! I'm so glad you finished this, you are such an excellent writer(and kind) considering that there is also an epilogue, anyways I can't hardly wait. :D
This is probably the best Yui x Mio I've ever read... :D
| ChronoZone chapter 13 . 10/25/2013
Yes! Go Mio! Declare your love for Yui!
I have been waiting for this moment..
I actually thought that Yui might have a crush on Mugi because of the way she acts but yeaahhh! She loves Mio, I can't wait to see what happen..
Review people! :D
| aaa chapter 1 . 10/24/2013
it started good but when..yui and ui appeared..everything got...how to explain it...boring?I just want a Mio x Ritsu love..they're a match made in heaven those 2 can't be apart...and really i would like a yui azu and...uixjun not reversing them...just saying that the first 4 chapters were great..then it suddenly got very bad for me..
| ChronoZone chapter 12 . 10/24/2013
This. Is. Awesome.
You. Are. Awesome.
Everything. Is. Awesome!
Thumbs up! I love the characters in your story especially Yui! I waited decades for this story to update but now, it was all worth it... The fact that Yui can move like that is incredibly fascinating...
Now let's see... My guess is Yui's parents are working as a secret assassin or something? Or they work for a secret anti-crime organization? I don't know, I'm not really good at this.
Anyways, this is a really good story and is worth spending time.
| TheMadYuriWriter16 chapter 12 . 10/23/2013
Bravo, bravo, your Yui may be a bad ass, but mine is based off Disturbed's 'The Guy', so HA.
Besides that I really enjoy the story and can only hope for more.
| Keita Sama II chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
hey, welcome back. I am glad youre back. Your story atm really interesting, i cant wait for your next updated! I need my Yui x Mio fix before my symptoms come and i start banging my head on the wall! ah by the way..im curious with your story plots, seems odd, by the looks of the flow of your story, it will be too complicated for mio and yui to be together
| ChronoZone chapter 11 . 6/2/2013
Goood Joooob ! I love this story, looking forward for more!
| sleepyhobo10 chapter 11 . 4/30/2013
When will the next chapter be out?
| Yuzu-kun chapter 11 . 4/13/2013
I can't wait for your next chapter. Check your grammar and spellings.
Anyways, I like where this is going. As for Yui's secret, I'm thinking it's some kind of crush-thing.
| Yuzu-kun chapter 2 . 4/13/2013
I'm reviewing in chapter 2 because I think it's going really smooth. I hope you don't abandon this and leave the readers waiting.
There's some few typos but that ain't much of a big deal now, is it?
| sleepyhobo10 chapter 10 . 4/10/2013
Cant you just post it? D: Im dying to read the rest of the story!
| sleepyhobo10 chapter 9 . 4/9/2013
Well, Im certainly looking forward to it!
| sleepyhobo10 chapter 8 . 4/8/2013
i love the story, and am looking forward to the next chapter.
| devilhamster chapter 6 . 4/5/2013
welcome back. i am glad to see you update this story as i have been very anxious to see how yui and mio hook up. anyway thanks for the chapter. i like it very much. seriously yui is to cute for her own good. .
| Keita Sama chapter 5 . 9/15/2012
are you still working on this story? it would be a shame if you abandon it when its finally getting to a good part.