Reviews for Make It Right
Number Girl chapter 6 . 6/1/2016
If this wasn't GOOD, I don't know what is.
That was wonderful how you brought us through Raven/Mystique's life, different stages, situations, and let us meet the girl. Really meet her.
Stellar job.
psychoanalyst chapter 6 . 5/29/2016
I know that you prob won't continue this story. But as someone who's watched all 6 films, I just want to comment that both stories SEEM to be in different universes... I'd like to believe that Raven would not poison Charles like that.
psychoanalyst chapter 1 . 5/29/2016
I just love these two together! Romantic or otherwise, their love was portrayed well. If only, the more recent X-men movies deepened their development more.
Ihamtmus chapter 6 . 8/30/2015
Ooooooooh! Girl, this... THIS. I enjoyed reading all of the chapters, really, but I almost stopped reading it when I got to a rather controversial beggining of chapter 3... Yet I wanted to read the rest. AND I'M SO HAPPY THAT I DID. The last chapter is... what can I say. It's the perfection. It's... amazing! I am so grateful that you wrote it. Well, well done! You see, I actually sobbed while reading it. And when I say I sobbed I mean it. I REALLY did sob. And I don't recall many fanfics (if any) which could do this to me. I often had a teary eyes, yes. But to sob? You made me sob, and congratulation. An amazing piece of work.
Have a beautiful day!
Fairy of stories chapter 6 . 3/25/2015
WHy do you make me cryyyyyy! But this was so good.
Guest chapter 6 . 9/25/2013
Argh this last chapter was heartbreaking ahhhhhhh but the story was good overall and very well written, thank you for sharing it with us.
Amy Hamato chapter 6 . 9/21/2013
I just cried so hard..

You should do a story where Raven doesn't leave.
TheWizardofOzbourne chapter 6 . 8/28/2013
Simply Amazing, that is all I can say about this story.

Thank you for writing it.
saicho-18 chapter 6 . 7/25/2013
love it.
warfolomei chapter 6 . 11/24/2012
Feels short, probably because it was that good.
warfolomei chapter 5 . 11/24/2012
Good characterization.
warfolomei chapter 4 . 11/24/2012
This had some good feelings in it. Those poor confusing characters.
warfolomei chapter 3 . 11/24/2012
A lot of things happened here... and they worked well.
warfolomei chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
Hmmm... good man, I think you are up to something here!
Polyjuice Princess chapter 6 . 8/6/2012
good stuff
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