Reviews for First time's a charm
hinatagirl0805 chapter 6 . 10/1/2011
Well at least they r together update soon
Beekeeper101 chapter 6 . 10/1/2011
interesting
hinatagirl0805 chapter 4 . 7/13/2011
so short! boo! but it was still good.
hinatagirl0805 chapter 3 . 7/9/2011
short but it is cute. u should continue. update soon!
Okazaki323 chapter 3 . 7/8/2011
i give up. the chapters are so short. i have no idea what the hell is going on. you never even say when this story is taking place.
Okazaki323 chapter 2 . 7/7/2011
i don't see how the plot is ever going to move forward with only a couple hundred words per chapter. the only way it could would be: A. you have a LOT of chapters, or B. the plot moves way to fast. it took less than a minute to read. it really doesn't take much time to write more than 250 words.
Okazaki323 chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
The plot is interesting. But it literally takes less than a minute to reAd.
adngo714 chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
that was short, but good. I wonder what Hinata's plan is...
Dread Knight N7 chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
Well that was fast