Reviews for Sins of the Family
kaori and yoshi chapter 11 . 5/10/2013
iruka meets the old man in gizah right? oh i cant wait! -
Mr. Shy Rockstar chapter 11 . 12/29/2012
Wow. I really loved everything I just read. Is this the end or will there be more? If there is I can't wait for an update :D I like how it ended for Masao the same way it begun... With a Hashibara leaving him to die a slow and painful death... only this time Masao really does deserve that kind of death.

I loved this!

Raeshi chapter 11 . 12/24/2012
Great story, well written. Can't wait to read more.
corgigrape chapter 11 . 10/27/2012
I've really enjoyed this story! There were a few confusing grammatical mistakes or missing words, but otherwise it flowed well. You are especially good at writing action sequences! I find most fanfic authors avoid them, but I could picture yours well and they easily fit into the Naruto world; I doubt Kishimoto or the anime script writers could have done much better. My favorite part was Kakashi's porn collection and Ayumi the Accountant! Thanks for posting this!
Moo-Choochan chapter 11 . 10/8/2012
omg so excited for the last chapter!
SonYukiGoku'sSister chapter 11 . 10/8/2012
ONe word: Wow! (very, very, slow Wow!)
fan girl 666 chapter 11 . 10/7/2012
AMAZING chapter i loved it
JaketheDog33 chapter 11 . 10/7/2012
That chapter was simply awesome. Your descriptions, as always, were very detailed without being unnecessary. I have a feeling the next chapter may be the end?
Blaise chapter 10 . 6/18/2012
Great story, I love the character development. This will definitely go on bookmark and I hope you'll continue it!
Viv D chapter 10 . 2/13/2012
Omg love the plot! :) Looking forward to an update..but dont feel stressed, take your time. ;)
mp.rago chapter 10 . 1/27/2012
his chapter was awesome!

surpassed only by the terrifying end ... I hope Kakashi arrives in time to help Iruka, his ancestors could guess make an appearance just to cheer on the strange struggle has just begun.
fan girl 666 chapter 10 . 1/27/2012
very awsome chapter i love noth Kakashi and Iruka's fights and the evil cliff hanger at the end
anon chapter 10 . 1/27/2012
Two words...Oh, shit. Yep, well that summed up my reaction for the last paragraph.

As for the chapter, well worth the wait!

Looking forward to the next one!
ZR chapter 10 . 1/27/2012
By the lords! You end the chapter with that? I'm so worried now.

BTW awesome how Iruka killed Jiro, too bad failed in killing the demon.

OMG how will this end...I'm at the edge of my seat here!

Also great Chapter!
j.Thompson chapter 9 . 1/22/2012
You have to have to haaaaaaaaaavw to finish this story! Don't let the writers block monster eat your brain! :D
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