Reviews for World War III
KK Renee chapter 6 . 7/10/2012
Um, excuse me? Thank you.
You need to update.
And I just lost all of what I was going to say. . .
Well, the point was that I was going to convince you to update. Oh, I remember what the threat was!
Update or I'll throw you out the window, the window, the second story window!
Woah, haven't used that one in a while.
I should look up the song. I haven't heard it in two years. Maybe they have a music video for it...
Anyway, just update will you?
Do it!
I dare you to!
Double dog dare!
I triple dog dare you!
Ha, ha, now you have to do it!
Sorry...I'll just be headed out now. I think I'm going crazy because I'm still stuck at home, recovering from my surgeries. It's driving me wild.
Maybe I should build a monster in my basement. That would be fun.
Or I could give a monkey a shower.
But I don't have a monkey.
And I'm rambling. . .
Yeah, I'll leave now.
wisdom-jewel chapter 5 . 12/26/2011
Pretty good chapter. I can't wait to see more and I wonder if they would reach to Xavier's soon. I wonder when Elliot would make her next appearance
xXxRandom KatxXx chapter 5 . 12/26/2011
Nice chapter, the only thing is Annie's name is spelled Annastasia, everything else is great!
Dracarot chapter 5 . 12/25/2011
Hmm, looks like the situations deteriorating badly, first both Summer's gone, and now the Professor as well, and now under rationing.

This situation just keeps getting better and better.

Good to see William appeared, albeit he appeared a chapter prior, and hopefully his unit will be able to catch up...
KK Renee chapter 5 . 12/25/2011
Yay! You updated! Now just update sooner next time. lol XD
wisdom-jewel chapter 4 . 11/14/2011
Good chapter, sorry for the delay of this review. I wonder how the fight will turn out. I'm happy I didn't choice black hair for Elliot, she looks better with auburn/red hair.
xXxRandom KatxXx chapter 4 . 10/26/2011
Glad to see you're updating! Great chapter, can't wait for more.
KK Renee chapter 4 . 10/22/2011
Yay! You updated! And I finally got to read it all! You better update soon.
Muse of Storytelling chapter 4 . 10/21/2011
Awesome. I like this chapter, and can't wait to read more from you.
wisdom-jewel chapter 3 . 7/6/2011
Pretty good start, can't wait till you update
The Lady Cloudy chapter 3 . 7/6/2011
Good chapter. No I wasn't insulted, but then again I am not super religious. Thanks for using Livi!
KK Renee chapter 3 . 7/6/2011
Awesome! And on vacation, too!
Muse of Storytelling chapter 2 . 6/27/2011
Great story, here is my oc.

Name: Rai Choi

Codename: Volt

Gender: Female

Age: 18, almost 19

Personality: Rai is sarcastic and outgoing. She is extremely determined and stubborn. She will disobey orders that she knows are wrong, but is very loyal to someone who is a good leader. She is protective of her friends. She is also very confident in her self and her abilities (but not in a conceited way)

Appearance: Short and slim. She has straight black hair with long layers that goes down to her shoulder blades and electric blue eyes. Her skin is a creamy tan and she looks delicate.

Powers: Rai has Electrokinesis / Technokenesis, she can shoot electricity at people, is mostly immune to electrocution, charge up her body with electricity, charge metal objects and throw them (they would let of their charge on contact), and either repel or attract metal objects to her (like and electromagnet), cause blackouts and control machines for short periods of time. She can also hack into machines using this abilities

Weaknesses: She can get 'overcharged' and 'surge', this means that she is holding to much electricity and lets large amounts into the atmosphere, this can hurt all those around her, enemies and friends. She can only hold so much electricity at a time (she is constantly replenishing her supply which can cause lights to flicker and machines to go a little funky so if she is stuck somewhere, like a forest, and she runs out of electricity, than her powers are useless. If she totally takes over a machine she can only stay that way for about 15-45 minutes, depending on how many machines their are, how powerful they are, and how tired she is.

Pure Blood: YES, her family is as pro K-Pro as they can be, her father is actually is on the council that runs it.

Family: Father: Joseph Choi, 47; is ruthless and believes mutants don’t deserve to live, is extremely smart in technology and is very logical

Mother: Maiko Choi, 40 is the perfect housewife, obeys Joseph’s every command, she only wants social status. Dotes on Hiro.

Older Brother: Hiro Choi, 28; the most aloof, conceited, arrogant person ever. According to the girls at Rai’s old school, he is amazingly handsome. He is also very smart.


Rai was always second fiddle to Hiro, even though she was better at technology than him. She saw her parents rarely and lived at an all girls boarding school for extremely rich pure blood girls. Her mother only seemed to like her in front of her friends, were she bragged about how beautiful and smart both her children were. In private, her mother totally ignored her, focusing her attention on Hiro.

Her powers manifested when she was 14, she was frustrated and angry with her family, and she accidentally cause a blackout that covered a 200 mile radius. She knew that parents wouldn’t hesitated to give her up the K-Pro so she ran away. To her knowledge her parents pretend that they have sent her to an obscure boarding school; they aren’t doing this out of love, they know what would happen if it was realized that there was a mutant in the family. She knows a lot about the K-Pro, like locations, and some passwords (she doesn’t need the password thought with her Technokenesis). She found the x-men when she was 16 years old.
KK Renee chapter 2 . 6/25/2011
I know it was named after Edward Kelly, but I just thought it was funny and had to share it. (Who knows why I did? I was half asleep, though.)

GASP! I got caught!

Awesome chap, awesome story!
Dracarot chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
Name: Lieutenant Colonel William Hull

Age: 25

Appearance: Height: 5'11" Weight 185lbs Atheltic build. Hair black, kept at military buzz cut length, hazel eyes. Scars on his right cheek.

Personality: While a strict commander on the battlefield, he refuses to be a totally by the books officer, telling all of his subordinate officers "To use your bloody common sense and get creative" if it turns out his own orders would be stupid to follow through with. He is a bit of a snarker and doesn't take well to those who would simply follow anybody blindly. When he is under none of the pressures of his rank he is generally more humorous. For now his chief desire is to unite mutants and Anti-K humans in an offensive to finally end the war once and for all as per the plan enacted by his home colony.

Powers: Nondetection can enter a state of invisibility, that also keeps him from being heard, smelt, sensed by infrared, telepaths, or empaths. The only way he could be found in this state is via actual contact or contact based sensors, excluding radar.

Family: Pure-bloods (anti Kelly)

History: Born shortly after the defeat of Apocalypse, to what would later be termed pure-bloods, William spent his first seven years in the Uneventful times, while his father, a Commander in the U.S. Navy was stationed on Hawaii. After the beginning of World War III things went to hell, his father defecting from the now Pro-K U. and inititating a rebellion throughout the Hawaiian chain. Over the next seven years, his father launched offensives throughout the pacific, taking various small islands for Anti-K forces, going with the two part theory that A. these islands would be chiefly ignored during the first stages of the war, and B. that the theory that the X-gene started becoming more active after the rise of the Atomic Bomb would mean more powerful mutants in the Pacific, as most of the testing of these weapons occured there initially. At this point an attac was launched on Honolu, which had been dubbed the capital of "The United Pacific Republic". It was at this point that WSilliam's powers revealed themselves allowing him to hide from the attacking forces and warn the defense forces of what was occuring. After this he went into military training, and through his work in the conflict has risen to the rank of Lieutenant Colonel. The United Pacific Repoublic is now prepared to launch "The Summer (named for the season not for Scott's family) Contingenccy". A plan to end the war once and for all created by his father, now an Admiral and head of the armed forces of the UPR. The plan calls for offensives into East Asia, Australia, South America and Alaska/Canada, to rally mutant's and antiK forces in Asia and South America (which are higher then they are in the more industrialized world, as most of these people were being opressed already) and sweep westward, and northward respectivelly. The Canadian forces are to simply smuggle as many troops as they can into the North to slam into the U.S. and aid any anti-K and mutant rebel bands they come into contact with and can supply without undo risk to their forces, which, thanks to technopathic mutants are more advanced then anything the K-Pro forces have. William is stationed with the Canadian arm of the UPR forces and has learned of the X-mens survival and is inbound to send in some supplies and soldiers to aid them.
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