|Reviews for Apart So Long|
| Ruby of Raven chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
Woah! Is there more to it? I hope there is!
| SnoopyGirl213 chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
That was sweet!
| readingKs chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
Love the poem, its a better take on the song-fic
Good work on the suspense leading to his arrival
and loved the part about the pirates
However, I thought the way she told him she was pregnant was a little abrupt, and off-putting to the way the piece had flowed prior to that
Anyway, keep writing!