Reviews for Apart So Long
Ruby of Raven chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
Woah! Is there more to it? I hope there is!

Update soon!
SnoopyGirl213 chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
That was sweet!
readingKs chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
Great Job!

Love the poem, its a better take on the song-fic

Good work on the suspense leading to his arrival

and loved the part about the pirates

However, I thought the way she told him she was pregnant was a little abrupt, and off-putting to the way the piece had flowed prior to that

Anyway, keep writing!