Reviews for Roses Are Red
Xstormy-eyesX chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
Yay luv it
Fahiru chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
I had totally forgotten how much I wanted to see this couple.

I really liked it! Beezus's character is good, I was really impressed with Henry's initiative. I like seeing them together so much in fact, I think I'll write one of my own too just so I can see them together!

Thanks for the inspiration!

-Fahiru
Phoebe Cloud chapter 1 . 3/17/2012
'Dear Beatrice,

Roses are red,

Violets are blue,

Love never crossed my mind,

Until the day I met you (which would be the first day of kindergarten)

Love,

He-Who-Must-Not-Be -Named

P.S. No, it isn't Voldemort!'

YES! I FREAKIN LOVED THAT! The Harry Potter reference was my favorite part ;)
Mrs. Bailey Harrison chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
Liked the HP referance! Gong to see it tonight!
JackieStarSister chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
I noticed a couple of technical errors, just thought I'd bring them to your attention:

"I just hope today would end as perfect as perfect as I dreamed." I think that was a typo, when you said "as perfect" twice. Also, it's kind of a rule of writing that you start a new paragraph when a different person speaks; that makes it easier for the reader to follow who is saying what.

"The meaning of a single red rose that had already bloomed was down the street away from my house was Henry." That seems like two sentences merged.

This was cute and sweet! Only, I couldn't tell, how old are Beezus and Henry - middle school or high school? I'm eager to see some Ramona/Howie interaction! Good luck!
li'miss sunshine chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
That was super cute! Love it! XD