Reviews for Fan Fiction, Sex Gods and Single Girls |
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![]() ![]() UrDifficult2Read is the funniest name for a review ever. Like so direct and to the point XD |
![]() ![]() Hey! Loving the story but some of the tones are misogynistic. For example the quote “And of course it had been easier as time went by, to encourage a chase with self-assured, aggressive woman. You mean a bimbo.” Self assured, aggressive men are seen as powerful and suave but for women it’s that they are bimbos? Kinda rude tbh. Also saying “innocent” instead of virgin is based in the idea that virginal people are pure and holy whereas women who have had sex are seen as used and sinful. That’s not a great message to send to any girls reading this. Like I said, love the story and I realize it’s been completed for quite a while so these comments won’t change anything. But I did want to voice my opinion on those themes in the story. It’s still a really fun read! Thanks for writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story very much thank you for sharing. Regards Toni |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was worried you wanted to write another sex scene when you started with blindfold. Thankfully not this time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapters Scorpions - "Still Loving You" was more fitting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That goes especially interesting and even more meta. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh heh starting the story with bang and now the matching bang. That last paragraph distracted me from what I had been planning to focus on for this chapter comment. It was extreme contrast reading this chapter while listening to Sabaton - 1916. It was interesting to read female pov and romance focused story. I first read fanfic sex scene in 2011 and didnt understand English that much yet that time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If the event isnt discussed in future chapters I would have to consider this chapter pointless. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its amusing how after reading this chapter I decided its time to clean my ffn profile. Hadnt changed it since 2015. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Once again I feel the need to tell how much I enjoy such descriptions. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Even better. |
![]() ![]() ![]() When visiting library today I happened to notice Stardust (Neil Gaiman) on shelf. I assume you picked it as fictional name but it was still funny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am happy I stayed long enough to get to this part. It was everything I was hoping for. "Reading the books" genre was one of my favorites when ffn banned them. In fact that was the event that made me start download all stories I decided to read, after having to ask for rest of that story by email. Habit I only in recent years stopped when ffn made it too annoying to download everything. Now that is only reserved for most exceptional stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seems like setup to have Bella miss locking her computer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I suppose now with blood involved its clear that this story has nothing to do with twilight. |