I really like how you guided us through all their memories using the scrapbook. It was beautifully done.

Oh my God! This is hilarious. Didn't see that coming. Loved it!

this story is the best ever. i love when he reads the first chapter and his reactions.

I love the story but it is very repetitive, you write it from bella's point of view and then you write it in edward's and then you write a whole chapter telling what happened again. I think it's too much especially that you don't write it in each character point of view alone, you write it as a third person and at the same time as if it's bella's or edward's. So i really hope that the other chapters won't be like that because i really like the story.

I just finished a complete re-read of this story and had to drop you a line to say thank you so much for sharing this with all of us! The number of times I (very literally) laughed out loud reading this amazed me - you have a real gift for comedic writing:)

I want to finish this story, I really do. It really is a great concept, but it's soooooo repetitive with both points of view. It also seems lengthy because there's a huge back story to EVERYONE in the story. And you're a good writer, intelligent, and well used vocabulary. My only suggestion is doing a bit more editing.

I'll keep trudging forward, because I have a bit of OCD when it comes to reading. I have to finish everything I start. ;)

I really love how you are wrapping this story up. I have fallen in love with these two. It so well done. I don't want it to end. Thank you for sharing. You're very talented.

Everything is turning out perfect. His birthday surprise for Bella was so sweet and thoughtful. I guess when you know you know so moving in together just makes sense. Yay!

Very good chapter!

It's crazy redic how much I loved this story. I laughed, I spit out fluids, I required mouth to mouth by an EMT Edward... This was awesome. Well written and wit for days. Thank you for sharing!

I couldn't help but comment; as I was reading about the food contents of Edwards kitchen I realized I have almost the exact same stuff in mine, save for the swanky booze. Kudos on keeping the characters relatable!

Wait, what? Was not expecting that! I feel like I was whipping around a corner in the vanquish with vampire edward!

Omg. That started off sooo painful! Haha! It was awesome. And then the truck dying a loud, painful death at the end. We've arrived to the "bitches be jealous when Bella rolls up to school in Edwards car!" I love it!

The end of the chapter was beautiful. She didn't want to forget one moment. That's what we are all looking for.

I didn't not expect them to advance so quickly. I guess with a sex god like Edward, not even a nun could hold out!