Reviews for Schmerz
Naruko202 chapter 4 . 4/29
Just awesome :)
LaMartienneElfique chapter 4 . 2/21
Wonderful story, really, very touching, and so dark at the same time, I loved it - and will certainly read it again from time to time since it's a short one. You should totally write more of them, Charles and Erik are such interesting and complex characters, and you get them so well ! Oh, and the ending was perfect :)
Kokoroyume chapter 4 . 6/1/2014
Great story ;)
Kyrene once Blood Roses chapter 4 . 2/15/2012
And what started me off with your stories. Sorry, I read all this in class so I couldn't review. Now reviewing all the things.

Yooou. The significance of the coin and everything related to it was just fantastically and beautifully written. Charles' conversation with Shaw...I was so worried it would go differently, but it went perfectly. I just...wow.

Again, I'm picky with Charles, I don't think people can really make it work with him sometimes...but you really did.
Princess Nat chapter 4 . 2/1/2012
Wow, good story. I really liked Charles' 'voice' in this story. Thanks for sharing.
bbb136 chapter 4 . 1/2/2012
Beautifully written. Emotionally intense. I'm impressed. :) Please write other X-men stories, they are such a pleasure to read.
Cordelia Darcy chapter 4 . 12/11/2011
*spontaneously combusts* That was amazing! No, it was beyond amazing, it was...REALLY amazing! SUPER amazing! UBER amazing! :D

Them making the coin into matching rings was probably my favorite part of the whole fic- it's going into my version of XMFC canon. In fact, this whole fic is going in! Congrats :) Thanks a million for taking the time to write this, never ever ever stop writing!

-Cordelia
Cordelia Darcy chapter 3 . 12/11/2011
Ooh, I liked this chapter :3 You write the interplay between them so perfectly! A-and they're staying together! *happy tears* Gah, Cherik causes me to transform into an emotional wreck- in the best way.
Cordelia Darcy chapter 2 . 12/11/2011
Ah! In the section with them playing chess, was it just me or did the coin start sounding a whole heck of a lot like the one ring? (As in "Lord of the Rings") It was being all creepy...and talking to Charles o_O And OH MY GOD. I'd never realized that by pushing Sean off of the satellite dish, Erik was doing almost the exact same thing Shaw did to him- use your powers, or you die. I'd always seen that scene as comic relief, but now...ah!

Also: they kissed :)
Cordelia Darcy chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
Ooh, interesting premise! Ugh Moira, your stupidity knows no bounds! Yep, I'm a hater. But she quickly rose to #1 on my list of "Most despised movie characters of all time" after a certain incident near the end of the film...*cough cough the beach cough*
Juu chapter 4 . 11/20/2011
I'm tempted to print this out, send it to the studios of the X-Men movie and tell them: Here is how it should have happened!

This story was truly wonderful.

It was not out of Character, not fluffy or sickly sweet.

It was just pure perfection!

I was worried about what you would write about the battle. Too often fanfic-writers turn the events in a way that makes you think: Why would that happen? This is so unrealistic.

But your story had just the right amount of pain, anger, confusion but also hope, promises and love to work out.

The scene with Shaw and Charles "talking" in their minds was really great and I was so torn, so caught up in the story, I could hardly sit straight.

Charles kept his promise not to leave Erik and now Erik can finally let go of his shadowed past and look into the future ahead of him.

Also, even though I find it a little morbid (sorry) I still think the idea of the rings is great.

This way they will remember the past, not forget what they fight for.

The metal does not represent Eriks revenge and anger anymore, but the healing and love he has found now.

I can't recall the last time I found such a facinating and wonderfully written story. It's a true masterpiece.

Thank you so much for sharing this here.

And please write more, your talent is amazing.
Juu chapter 2 . 11/20/2011
Usually I never review between chapters, but this is just so good that I have to.

I'm actually worried what will happen in the next Chapter.

Let me just tell you: This is wonderfully written. I'm amazed.

The story of that coin, the exchange between Moira and Erik. Charles' worries.

The way Erik reactes after he pushed Sean during training is something no one ever thought of before, so I must compliment this the most. I never read anything alike in any other XMFC Story I read so far.

You have an amazing talent!

(and now, I will read on... And I can asure you: My hands are trembling with suspense while I'm typing this review)
Kenya chapter 4 . 9/4/2011
I liked it. Grabbed my attention from the beginning and didn't let me go until the end I would love if you wrote more stories.
Nuine-Naine chapter 4 . 8/30/2011
Uuuuuh, loved it. Awesome! Ever since I watched First Class I am so for Erik/Charles . Although I couldn't imagine it while watching the other movies. I admit, they always had this air around them but...well, they were old '

Some correction for your German sentences and words.

Let's make a "Liebster" out of "liebe", won't we. I am sure you googled or leoed "Love" as in "My love". They will only give you "Liebe" as translation but, believe me, it has to be "Liebster".
jngan1 chapter 2 . 8/25/2011
I just started reading your story today and am hooked! You bring such a great perspective from Erik's past that I am eager to know like Charles. Well written! Continuing now :)
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