|Reviews for Cleaning no Jutsu|
| BlueTea21 chapter 15 . 3/22/2020
That ending was just perfect. I had a hard time imagining Gai after the war, but you nailed it!
| fleeting . white . feathers chapter 15 . 3/1/2020
Reread this. The epilogue made me tear up more than the first time I read it huhuhu. Thank you!
| rose.chan27 chapter 15 . 3/1/2020
Still one of the cutest stories I've ever read!
| Dragons and Dragons chapter 15 . 2/28/2020
So, I don’t like romances. If a story has little enough romance, I skip it or slim out to get to the good stuff: the platonic fluff, the friendships, the action. If a story has too much romance, I quit it halfway through or never click on it to begin this. I read this to see the story of a plucky civilian woman who won’t take anyone putting her down.
That’s not why I finished the story. The feelings between Hikari and Gai were beautiful, despite being romantic. I find myself cheering on their relationship against my will, and smiling at their cuteness and Youth. So, congratulations. It’s not often that I can say I actually enjoyed a romantic story because of the romance and not in spite of it, but this story fits the bill. It’s incredible, really.
Thanks for writing this and letting us read it.
| Guest chapter 15 . 2/25/2020
| Aero Faerie Extraordinaire chapter 15 . 2/18/2020
In a rush so short review sorry but - fab, loved it, also loved the epilogue.
| ForestShadeau chapter 14 . 1/6/2020
Thanks for the hard work love the story _
| Scarlet Dewdrops chapter 14 . 1/1/2020
I just did a reread, and it's just as good as the last time. The end of chapter 14 kept popping in my head and I was like oh hey yeah I haven't read that in a while, and I'm glad I did because it was definitely worth it. Thanks for writing and posting! :)
| HonorGuard Ra chapter 7 . 12/1/2019
Favorited story. Author Favorited. Thank you for this.
| Nariel Helyanwe chapter 15 . 11/29/2019
I come back to this fic every once in a while and it always makes me so happy and satisfied :D
| May525 chapter 3 . 11/27/2019
Ooh~ I really like this so far!
| Mary kitten heart chapter 14 . 10/29/2019
Okie the ending line is just so SWEET
| Motherofthehorde chapter 15 . 10/18/2019
This is STILL one of my favorites..
Short but complet.
And cannon if you squint...real hard.
Thank you, again, for writing.
| HeckCookie chapter 15 . 9/28/2019
generally i don't do reviews
especially considering that this fic was finished for a long time now
but (because there is always a but)
you have no idea how much i needed to read something like this at this point in my life
i love Hikari and how she overcomes the challenges in her life
her bluntness and a way of seeing things
i love how i can practically feel the love
the vividness and colours and all of the other original metaphors
and i love that there is hooe
because they come hand in hand
thank you very much for this inspiring story
| Scarlet Dewdrops chapter 15 . 9/11/2019
This was wonderful. I found it through another author's fav fics list, and I'm so glad I did. Thank you very much for writing and posting!