|Reviews for Bonds of Matrimony|
| Shelle007 chapter 16 . 8/7
"Take care of our little Deatheater in there." Best line ever!
| zamorabaggins chapter 32 . 7/14
But what happened to Draco? Great tale, thanks for sharing!
| Katie chapter 31 . 6/25
Damn you for still killing Fred. Damn it.
| Kat chapter 26 . 6/22
God save us from bleeding heart Gryffindors. Don't know if you meant to but this story has really highlighted all the major flaws of that house.
I'd rather be Ravenclaw, Slytherian, or even Huffelpuff any day. Good story by the way.
| Katie chapter 10 . 6/21
I was reading this on GrangerEnchanted (the first fic I read on that site btw). I finished chapter nine, and all of a sudden the website just wouldn't load. I tried on my cellphone and Kindle but it just gave me this error message. So I desperately Googled it. Lo and behold, here you are. I've tried to open the home page and it won't load either. :/
| WRose chapter 32 . 6/19
| Frenchie84 chapter 32 . 6/3
Ok, so I began reading this on Granger enchanted and somehow I found it here! I thought this story had a unique quality. And I'm always a sucker fill HG/SS, as they are my favorite pairing.
| Merlin chapter 4 . 5/22
Snape washed his hair for the event, that was about it. #DeadWithLaughter u killed me there ,)
| Guest chapter 32 . 3/29
| officialhermitsunited chapter 19 . 3/8
Hi! I'm loving your plot and character use/design, however there are a few grammatical errors we all make when writing. Redundancy is one thing I've noticed cropping up a lot in this work, which is to say the same word for description will get used more than twice in a collection of 4 sentences which is offputting to readers. There's also the issue of just a few spelling errors, but the worst are the ones where there are only one man and one woman in the scenario and there was an accidental "she" put where a "he" should have gone, and vice versa, confusing who said/did what. Finally, it's obvious you're not British. In fact, I will carry a guess you're American. Band-Aid is a brand from the US, however a more internationally neutral term used is the name of the product, bandages. "Mom" is American, whereas "Mum" is British, and a few other minor things. Other than that, your story is a fantastic read and I'm glad to have come across it.
| Guest chapter 32 . 2/23
can't help wondering what happened with Draco?
| Guest chapter 32 . 1/27
| Coralpotion chapter 32 . 1/2
I loved this story so much!
Thank you so so so much! You've made my year! congrats on your baby boy!
Love Cara xxx
| thatperfectsomeone chapter 32 . 12/27/2014
I love this such an amazing but intense story... Still feel that fred should have lived and dumbledore should have died
| dini chapter 1 . 12/10/2014
Well, i'm a hermione x severus snape fan, but then again when i read this fic it did not feels like you are writing hermione & severus, they lack the personality that makes them hermione & severus. Even voldemort did not sounds like voldemort. Yes, the plot is good, but in my opinion most of the character feels bland. I have to stop reading in chapter... i dont know, which chapter is it when snape & hermione have sex for the second time? Too many loop hole, too many ooc. And come onnnn.. lily as the password of his chamber? I dont think as a private person snape will just use 'lily' as keyword to anything, he will keep it to himself. And how did hermione know about it and the golden trio did not make a fuss about it in earlier chap?
But good effort there.
Keep on writing