Reviews for Summer Invasion
Chief Wolfee chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
Never mind the ast one, i didn't know it was completed, oh well. I need to read if it's done, before i do so. Sorry.
Chief Wolfee chapter 7 . 8/16/2012
Name: Kai Ryder. Goes by Ghost.

Gender: Male

Age: 29

Looks: His lower face is covered by a face mask, his eyes are emerald green and his hair is dark brown

Personality: Noble, Level Headed, Quick to Adapt, but above all very silent, never talks unless he's spoken to.

Courage Factor(1-10): 9

How smart?: He's not completely smart, but he knows battlefield smarts.

Abilities:(this includes marksmanship, driving, flying and strength) Marksman and Stealth/Recon.

Military? If so what rank, branch, and role,: Corporal, S.A.S, Sniper and Stealth.

Survives yes/no: Yes

Other Notes: Nope.
Red Leader chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
It's been a long time since I got back to reading fanficition. This is great start and fun to read.
JK707 chapter 1 . 10/29/2011
Name: Orion Sanders

Gender: Male

Age:24

Looks: Above Average, Caucasian. Has simple military cut hair and has green eyes. Wears the standard US Army uniform with goggles to protect his eyes, while a bandanna that conceals his face.

Personality: Quiet, Only talks to people that he is familiar with. The type that doesn't make stupid decisions.

Courage Factor(1-10): 6

How smart?: Average

Abilities:(this includes marksmanship, driving, flying and strength) Has a natural throwing arm, meaning grenades are a specialty. Can run for a extreme amount of time without becoming fatigued. Has a scary ability to spot the aliens.

Military? If so what rank, branch, and role,: Yes. Corporal, US Rifleman/ Demolitions specialist.

Survives yes/no: Uncertain. Prefer if he disappears during a large battle.

Other Notes: Has a personal sidearm; Desert Eagle. He seems likely to get killed, but never does. Because of his lifestyle, people he knew before military stayed away from him. Discovers the alien's weakness due to a very close encounter...
DJChef7 chapter 7 . 8/29/2011
For my character's forum I meant the air force girl Elena Santos for my character to fall for xD
DJChef7 chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
Name: Benjamin "Benny" Wilkes

Gender: male

Age: 25

Looks: tan skinned, Latino, brown eyes, dark brown hair, athletic body

Personality: man of few words, risky, never thinks of his own safety but of others before him very protective, strategic and head strong but in a good way, charmer, humorous

Courage Factor(1-10): 10

How smart?: strategic and quick thinker

Abilities:(this includes marksmanship, driving, flying and strength) fast reflex, marksmanship, blade specialist, good with computers, scavenger

Military? If so what rank, branch, and role,: US Marine Corps, on reserve, captain, called in when first sightings of meteorites

Survives yes/no: yes, near death experiences cause he takes risks to save others

Other Notes: loves all types of music but favors oldies best, has German Shepard dog, falls for US Air Force Martinez, weapons of choice: MG4, desert eagle, combat knife
Brendan Aurabolt chapter 1 . 8/22/2011
Ok I'm gonna go ahead and say what the 22 people before me didn't have the balls to:

Relying too much on reader-submitted ideas author has no idea WTF they're doing.

Fan Service is one thing but you stated at the beginning you have no idea where you're going to go, which already gave me a bad first impression for the story before I started reading it.

...Luckily for you, I enjoyed the opening Chapter. Wanting so many OCs you didn't make yourself is a major turnoff, though so I won't read any more of the story.

Sorry _
D.C Draco chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
Name:Drake "Dragon Knight" Cempron

Gender:Male

Age: 19

Looks: Blue eyes, white hair due to white paint, green camo fatigue and combat boots, wears helmet with visor over his eyes

Personality: helpful, kind, always thinks about his soldiers under his command along with the civilians. has a sense of humor even under heavy fire.

Courage Factor(1-10): 10

How smart?: extreme

Abilities:(this includes marksmanship, driving, flying and strength)Sniper, expert at CQC to long range fire fight fast at running

Military? If so what rank, branch, and role,: 1st Lt. Special operatives, All-rounder ,Easy Company EX-O

Survives yes/no: Yes (but sustains a scare or two)

Other Notes: tends to shout bazai when charging
IAmTheStars chapter 7 . 8/14/2011
I absolutely love cheesy, so I don't mind. This was a fantastic end and I really hope to see a sequel. I loved this story and your writing. :D

-IAmTheStars
Ultrarandomness333300 chapter 3 . 8/2/2011
Name: jake simmson

Gender: male

Age: 15

Looks: green eyes, fair coloured skin, black hair

Personality: patient

Courage Factor(1-10): 10

How smart?: extreme

Abilities:any sort of heavy weapon like machine gun mounted on a hummvee, gatling gun, rocket launchers, grenade launchers, bazookas, 50 cal machine guns, anti-air guns.

Military? If so what rank, branch, and role,: no

Survives yes/no: yes

Other Notes:

Please submit characters and please review thanks for reading. I plan on updating about every week.

Name: emma simmson

Gender: female

Age: 16

Looks: long black hair, green eyes

Personality: protective

Courage Factor(1-10): 10

How smart?: extreme

Abilities: traping enemy targets, bluffing, ambushing.

Military? If so what rank, branch, and role,:no

Survives yes/no: no

Other Notes:

Please submit characters and please review thanks for reading. I plan on updating about every week.
Takato3z4 chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
Name: chris forte

Gender:male

Age: 21

Looks: fair coloured skin brown hair brown eyes.

Personality:

not afraid to die

Courage Factor(1-10): 10

How smart?: extreme

Abilities: driving. can drive like a mad man

Military? If so what rank, branch, and role: no

Survives yes/no: does not survive

Other Notes: he kind of acts like a kamakazie

Please submit characters and please review thanks for reading. I plan on updating about every week.

Name: kate turner

Gender: female

Age: 19

Looks: long blonde hair, green eyes, pale skin

Personality: shy

Courage Factor(1-10): 7

How smart?: average

Abilities: stealth. able to cross a field without being spotted and never leavs a trace.

Military? If so what rank, branch, and role,:

Survives yes/no: yes

Other Notes: has a crush on chris forte

Please submit characters and please review thanks for reading. I plan on updating about every week.

Name: kyle hunter

Gender: male

Age: 19

Looks: black hair and blue eyes, pale skin

Personality: kind

Courage Factor(1-10): 9

How smart?: very smart

Abilities: sniping. can kill anything with one hit exept for armored vehicles.

Military? If so what rank, branch, and role,:

Survives yes/no: yes

Other Notes: nothing else

Please submit characters and please review thanks for reading. I plan on updating about every week.
IAmTheStars chapter 6 . 7/18/2011
This is great! :) You are writing Robin just as I imagined her, and the other oc's are awesome! One question though, How old is Robert? Through the I have never saw what age he is and I have been wondering that foe some quite some time now. But anyway, Keep updating! :D

-IAmTheStars
New-Classic22 chapter 6 . 7/18/2011
Hey! This was great, and I loved the way Crash was just like OOPS! ;) I will BETA for u if u want! Just a question, where did they all go for pretty much the whole second half of the chapter? Crash and most of the Other OC's, anyway, i hope to see more of them next chapter. UPDATE SOON! xx
IAmTheStars chapter 5 . 7/14/2011
This was an awesome chapter. You wrote Robin perfectly! Just as I imagined her. :) Keep going!

-IAmTheStars
New-Classic22 chapter 5 . 7/14/2011
Also, thankyou so much for the shout out! It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside! Plus - Im not gonna pass up some free advertising! Lol jks, thanks so much, and I'm super happy you like my story! xx
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