Story’s gone boring. Would’ be been good if the citadel assault had happened immediately

Your writing is shit.

Quick question, I am new to this fic. Is this going to be about immigration issues and such throughout the fic? Because if it is, I am not likely to read the rest of it. Others that did this become too preachy about real-world polictcs and less about the fanfiction fast that put me off.

Jeezus dude, give the civvies a break for once

Good to see C-sec finally pushing back. Hopefully the rest of humanity sees this shit and realizes what a dick Ryker is being trying to take the Citadel.

Enjoying this story you've given us. Keep up the good work!

Yeah, getting ugly as war tends to. Though fuck the Batarians. I know they aren't all evil SoBs, but that culture... yeah.

And I really dislike Jacob, and do hope he gets what he deserves for escalating the hell out of that clusterfuck. However considering the nature of such things, and that he is intelligent, not likely. Though considering he made himself a rallying point, he'll definitely get something.

Okay, why did they hit a Quarian place? Or are was she a slave that was in a Baterian held location?

Man, this is taking a long time to update. Still great chapter, keeps with the theme after so long.

It’s been so long that I didn’t think this story was even a thing anymore. Good to see an update on it!

Woah, wasn’t expecting an update to this! I’d actually given up hope, lol. Nonetheless, glad to see this fic wasn’t abandoned. :)

This turning nasty as hell .

My focus would restoring our planet ,developments of new technology to explore space not connected to the relays system .

Your username is a legend

What stood out most to me was how real the characters felt, easily outclassing most of ffnet. An excellent read, thank you for sharing.