Reviews for The Day the Arms Closed
Totally Emo chapter 4 . 7/23/2011
I like it!
Rommel The Magnificent chapter 4 . 7/23/2011
There are few things as dangerous as a madman with a legitimate grudge, and a desperate Humanity can produce a lot of madmen.

The Council is *Bleeped*
Atomic Sharks chapter 4 . 7/23/2011
maybe this might happen human, krogan, geth, quarian alliance the outcasts unite
miner249er chapter 4 . 7/23/2011
great chapter
Deadlined chapter 4 . 7/23/2011
If you're being turned into fresh slaver bait, you might as well deserve it...
NightStalker92 chapter 4 . 7/23/2011
I wouldnt say the Council kicked over a hornets nest. Mote like they stripped it of everything of value, and then smashed it with a sledgehammer!

Hopefully C-sec has been keeping their riot gear maintained...
luk3us chapter 4 . 7/23/2011
Interesting concept what would humanity do if the Council gave them the boot. I think I can agree that the Council didn't handle the whole, 'GTFO humans' announcement very well.

Looking forward to more. :)
douchiesnacks chapter 4 . 7/23/2011
good chapter, keep em coming.
Mercsenary chapter 4 . 7/23/2011
Write faster. Seriously. :D
Life of Nemo chapter 3 . 7/22/2011
great start, have you considered doing anything with the percious veil?
Kaylakoo chapter 3 . 7/21/2011
I'm really excited for this story; the concept is fantastic.

Will it be composed entirely of OCs or will familiar faces make an appearance? Gotta admit, its weird reading a Mass Effect story not focused on Shepard.
NightStalker92 chapter 3 . 7/19/2011
If u were the Council, I'd be worrying about how the humans would react.

Nothing says vengeance like tactical nukes deploy in the Citadel...
Pride of ZAFT chapter 3 . 7/18/2011
As another review said, that pesky Krogan demilitarization does sound like a problem, but if hacker Nirvana could manage to retrieve certain incriminating info on the STG's genophage renewal operation...well I leave the possibilites to you.

Would also like to see an event timeline to flesh out the background history of this universe in the next chapter.
Atomic Sharks chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
maybe the humans could cure part of the genophage where survival is about just as good as the krogan home world
Daryst chapter 3 . 7/18/2011
you have got the be kidding me. How come there aren't more chapters of this story. It read like a charm and the story seems to be going in a great direction.

I cannot wait for a new entry in this story.

Keep it up!
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