|Reviews for Mannequin|
| BU chapter 20 . 2/16
This is high-octane, well-crafted stuff. Full marks.
| Savitron5 chapter 20 . 11/8/2015
When are you going to update? I would love to hear the ending of this story, and find out when he is going to tell her everything and such.
| Mugetsu-Taicho chapter 20 . 10/28/2015
one of the best, if not the best g/v fanfic i have read so far... and its unfinished
| StanMathers chapter 20 . 10/24/2015
Who do I have to sacrifice for this to get updated? Family member, teacher, friend, you name it...
| Astronomer01 chapter 20 . 9/23/2015
awesome i just cannot wait to read more if you ever going to write it
all your characters are wonderfully developed ,espescilly gohan and videl .i liked the slow and steady pace you kept along with the good natured hercule .the interaction between gohan and videl were just fabulous and the part that i liked the most and that intrigued me was the description of the story wonderful
thank you for a wonderful read and i hope you continue this story some time in the future
| aira240302 chapter 20 . 6/25/2015
por que,no terminaste la historia yo la lei y necesito saber que rayos paso videl supo los secretos de gohan o gohan volvio a luchar (por favor que gohan vuelva a luchar nunca me gusto que dejara la lucha)pero por favor continua es una buena historia y se ve que le pusiste mucha dedicacion y mucha imaginacion tambien
| athoshg chapter 20 . 3/30/2015
Nooooooo! This is the last chapter posted?! I just binged on all of your writing at once and i am terribly sad to see it end.
I really should have reviewed every few chapters, but I just really got into reading and couldn't stop.
I love this story so much, I can really see your writing grow and improve as I read. Your transitions were where I saw the most change, they were a little choppy in One of the Guys leading it to be a little confusing, I was often distracted. But in this story all your transitions were incredibly smooth and did not distract at all from the flow of the story, which is excellent as I kept wanting to read as fast as I could consume it.
The depth you give to characters is astounding, I love every getting such a complex look at everyone you include. I especially love your version of Videl, not one who completely loses herself to Saiyaman, and not one who trusts so easily. And the pacing of your stories is soooo good! They take time for relationships to develop, and for the drama to really build. I love how Videl has her own issues to deal with, not just her conflict Saiyaman. I mean someone who grew up as she did should have problems, and she does and it is lovely! And Gohan! Oh! So good! It is like you took the most complex part of DBZ and expanded it into a fully developed, complicated, hurt character and I love every minute of it!
I would send more devotion in paragraphs if you let me read any more of you writing :D
| gabelou1991 chapter 20 . 3/25/2015
| Guest chapter 20 . 2/14/2015
Please update I love this story:)
| Mr.Son chapter 20 . 1/27/2015
| Guest chapter 20 . 1/18/2015
I love this story please update:)
| Guest chapter 20 . 12/9/2014
I love this story pls update
| Bui40 chapter 20 . 8/13/2014
Is there more? He can't keep everything from her, she's his girlfriend and I think that he should just tell her because she's gonna find out eventually. She is gonna be pissed and they could possibly break up if he keeps THAT big of a secret from her so might as well tell her before too much time passes.
And by the way, GREAT story!
| Guest chapter 14 . 7/28/2014
How many zillions of people fid he just kill?
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/27/2014
Ooooh THAT'S what homeroom is, I was always curious. Also, I love what you've done with Gohan, it's a very different take to what I'm used to. Another thing, *grin* Cpod is a stroke of GENIUS!