Reviews for Mannequin |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry a out your boyfriends accident. And lol fucking piccolo man |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fucking skittles lol. Dammit he ruined the moment. But that's good. Cuz I like not expecting what's going on cuz I expected well u know? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh god. He's drama lol. But how about the tournament? Videl finding about saiyaman? Can't wait |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol I see what u did there? The book thing. Breaking th 4th wall eh? That's wassup |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love these we know u like her Gohan just fucking admit it moments. And lol at the Angie break up. I'm really enjoying myself with this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eh bastard sharpened. Red pit of hell though? Lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well I liked that. But I don't like sharpener really... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the three things idea. Lol I can't believe Gohan wrote that stuff on his paper tho |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa that was something. Well I'll keep going then |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting... Update soon please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I'm liking this story so far. :D Curious as to when Videl's going to discover some of Gohan's secrets. Also, I like your version of Teen Gohan, this one doesn't just let everyone walk over him. Looking forward to seeing what you have planned for them. Have fun with your writing. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter, can't wait for your next update! Ino*** |
![]() ![]() ![]() things are not too easy for Gohan but he managed to integrate himself in school life pretty well so far... can't wait for your next update :) |