| Reviews for Mannequin |
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   LadyKhaiju chapter 1 . 6/21/2011 Actually I like it. Hope you post the next chapter soon. |
| I'm a person chapter 1 . 6/21/2011 Oooh angst! I love it! I am so excited to read the rest of this story! The thing is, I actually like Gohan out of character, so if it means anything, you definitely got me hooked! Be back next chapter! Update soon please! |
| Abdheib chapter 1 . 6/21/2011 NOOOOOO DIDN'T GET FIRST! Haha but really, very good start,and very descriptive too. Love the new way of writing and hope that you will continue the fic! :) |
| chimney leaf chapter 1 . 6/21/2011 Wonderful start. It read like a one shot until the final line, a good one at that. The last line incidentally was perfect. It seemed like a very traditional idea (Gohan thinking about what and who he is while preparing to begin school), but you really nailed it. |