Reviews for love confessions written on paper napkins
thehazeleyedloser chapter 36 . 3/15/2013
read 36/36. so good!
LovelySocks chapter 4 . 12/19/2012
I like it too! Very dark and biting. Nice job showing me the tone and explaining Teddy's emotions. Last line is killer. Rock on.
LovelySocks chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
How cinnamon-y sweet (sorry, I can't resist even the worst of puns). Never really got LucyScorpius, but it just fits together so nicely in a strange why the way you write it. It's beautiful.
KatnissandPrimWeasley chapter 24 . 11/5/2012
Oh :( that's sad. Good job at it, though.
KatnissandPrimWeasley chapter 20 . 11/5/2012
This is sad. Just, really sad. But very well written.
KatnissandPrimWeasley chapter 15 . 11/5/2012
This is great :)
There's orange coconut coffee? I never knew!
KatnissandPrimWeasley chapter 13 . 11/4/2012
Aww. Sad, but really good.
KatnissandPrimWeasley chapter 7 . 11/4/2012
How cute, I like this pairing. And you've made me very interested in the idea of Lily Luna as a Slytherin, how unusual! :)
Paragraph three should start off with "she" instead of "her", because you wouldn't say "her is kissing him", you would say "she is kissing him".
Sometimes I feel like I'm pestering people when I leave too many reviews in succession! O.O
KatnissandPrimWeasley chapter 6 . 11/4/2012
Aw! Cute, again!
In paragraph three, it should say "ideas" instead of "idea's". "Idea's" would be a contraction of "idea is".
-Prim (I hope you don't mind the criticism)
KatnissandPrimWeasley chapter 5 . 11/4/2012
Aw, so cute! :)
In the first paragraph, however, there should be a comma between "James" and "both", not a semicolon, because a semicolon indicates a new thought, and "both of who were playing... Etc." is not a complete thought. And also, instead of "both of who", it should read "both of whom".
Otherwise really great!
KatnissandPrimWeasley chapter 4 . 11/3/2012
I like this.
Instead of "it's you're fault", it should say "it's your fault." You're is the contraction for you are, your is the possessive.
marniemadden chapter 36 . 10/29/2012
LOUIS MY POOR BABY ugh the last line and "dragons are cool" and I have an OC called Emily but unimportant and the idea of slotting café au lait in I have no more words
marniemadden chapter 35 . 10/29/2012
I don't like either of these pairings but put them together and BOOM! (apparently, idek.) This was just such a good idea and the prompts were used lovelyly because that's a word okay and I'm running out of things to saaaaay
KatnissandPrimWeasley chapter 3 . 10/29/2012
Aww! This is fantastic :)
marniemadden chapter 34 . 10/29/2012
Oh Merlin, this was so adorable. asdfghjkl. I loved the way you made their relationship so fluffy and I loved how much Roxanne missed him and I loved how you used the prompts and I don't have much else to say. Great job wooo
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