Reviews for A New Place To Stay
Guest chapter 10 . 2/8/2021
I can't help thinking that harry hasn't stopped growing yet so growth hormone would stimulate extra height. So if there are non-magical means of getting taller, wouldn't the wizards have something similar?
Smilesaway2201 chapter 79 . 1/20/2021
Daaaaang! Incredible, moving, powerful, 10/10. I am a sucker for mentor/dad!snape and this ticked many many boxes! Thank you!
mlhspets chapter 60 . 1/17/2021
Great story
MasterHarryRiddle chapter 79 . 1/16/2021
awesome story. it was great. can erase the smole on my face. and ready to start anothe rof your stories!
MasterHarryRiddle chapter 51 . 1/14/2021
great story. but today i give a lumos for alan rickman! rip. would have love tobsee a positive side if snapenon the movies
wmadavis chapter 79 . 1/3/2021
The lasting impression of this story is that Harry and Snape get closer while a variety of Harry's old friends are set up as straw men for Harry to throw his hate upon. And even by parameters of the story Harry's hate is excessive and Neville's friendship looks opportunistic. And the story became tedious as it followed the Canon playbook right up to the big battle at Hogwarts at the end. This is like a bad redo fic that just follows Canon and doesn't "redo" anything. The fic presents Harry and Snape as following a better way in dealing with Voldemort, but when they end up in a Battle at Hogwarts just like Canon then their way is no better than Dumbledore's would have been. Some characters survived that died in Canon but I can't see that Harry and Snape's process made the difference there. This story got very tedious as it wound to the end.
Dracoo chapter 79 . 12/10/2020
This book was amazinggggggg I loved it
Guest chapter 5 . 11/27/2020
THIS IS AMAZING
MoniGems7 chapter 18 . 11/21/2020
I almost started crying when I read that the strand for Sirius was no longer there oh god this is such a good story
Aratherfluffyfatcat chapter 79 . 11/19/2020
Enjoyed the story thanks
Guest chapter 66 . 11/17/2020
There are muggle repelling wards on Grimmauld Place just like at Hogwarts. The Blacks were a purist family who despised muggles. How would Hermione's parents be able to stay there? Furthermore the house is under the Fidelis charm. Can they even go there as people without any magic, probably not. Also you can't just keep stuffing more and more people into the house. It was already uncomfortably full to begin with.

Also consider they own their own dentist practice. If they went on leave for an unspecified amount of time they would lose their practice and their home. That is their main source of income. They can't just give up their lives indefinitely until the war may or may not end with Voldemort being defeated. And if he was not defeated then they would still be screwed.
Guest chapter 65 . 11/17/2020
The story is interesting enough without sucking up to Snape and slamming Dumbledore, Sirius, Ron and Hermione every other sentence. It is ridiculously heavy handed. This chapter was again laughable. Molly might have disagreed with Sirius but there was no reason for her character to say Harry was better off alone facing Death Eaters than with Sirius because he brought up Harry's parents dying to save him.

You take the Snape worship to such a level it is disgusting. Half the time he is being abusive and you make it seem as if it is admirable. A grown man treating a child of 11 with such disdain because he didn't get to sleep with his mother is gross. He isn't a saint. Breaking a child's arm while dueling and saying you are proud he kept fighting is also abusive. Imagine a teenager playing football or karate and his parents saying the same. No one would be lining up to give them a parent of the year trophy. Social services would be called.

You take an interesting and complex character and try to exalt his flaws. It perverts the whole story. You turn each character into flat, one dimensional cartoons of themselves in place of rich, dimensional people. No one is flawless. Friends make mistakes in trusting adults, people place expectations on children based on their parents. Neither of those things makes that person a demon.
Nina chapter 79 . 11/15/2020
Thank you very much for this great story! I really loved the story itself, Severus and Harry's relationship. His friendships with Neville and Luna. I love this ending where they all live together in Prince Manor and Harry's career. It's original. I love Zar and that Ron and Sirius have grown up. I have so much when Severus realized his mistakes with Harry and how he took care of him. Like when he gave his arts gifts. Thank you very much for this story.
fil chapter 48 . 11/14/2020
I hate when Snape think to spanking Harry. It's horrible! It' so violent to spanking a child! And disgusting he has 16 years it'll be a sexual abus to touch this party of his body.
airunee chapter 29 . 11/7/2020
It always puts a smile on my face everytime I read Snape calling Harry his son (づ )づ~
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