Reviews for Naruto the toad sages apprentice
Naruto chapter 4 . 9/3
There are many mistakes and names are not correct. Please edit.
MGStarFire chapter 21 . 8/11
Naruto could have killed Sasori easily by himself yet he only sends Gai and Kakashi after Gaara's body while the rest did nothing while he fought.
Another thing Naruto disrupted the seals which was done quicker than kanon so the extraction of the ichibi shouldn't have been completed.
MGStarFire chapter 12 . 8/11
you're following kanon too closely i decided to read this story becouse nightfall is one of my favorites but this one is painful to read i'm gonna try to push through but if the quality doesn't increase in the next 10 chapters i'm gonna have to drop it
ahitt6345 chapter 14 . 8/2
"forbidden love between shinobi from two unfriendly villages meet by chance and fall in love then war breaks out and separates them forced to fight in the end they flee so they can be together" - I wanna read this story lol.
football78 chapter 7 . 8/1
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Mupplez The Frog chapter 68 . 7/31
I am both pleased, and infuriated at Sakura's character in this story. I am immensly angered and/or stunned, that I just want to slap her some sense, she's just so dillusional. On the contrary however, I applaude the author for the skill of conveying a character, to make me feel this way.
Mupplez The Frog chapter 3 . 7/28
I know this is late, but I feel that Naruto stops liking Sakura too suddenly. I think you could of cut off his thoughts halfway, to, "Plant the seeds of doubt", for it to grow to Naruto not liking her, a chapter, (or two) later.
I want to write chapter 14 . 6/22
That summary of the book that jiraiya said in chapter 14. Is this foreshadowing? Or are you gonna write a story based off that summary? If you're not, then please make that story. Sounds interesting.
Guest chapter 12 . 6/15
Boi learn punctuation. It is realy bad.
midnightscar17 chapter 98 . 6/11
Update please
midnightscar17 chapter 80 . 6/11
I dont think she ever would have. N shes not spineless she was a pretty good person after shippuden still a bit delusional but a good person
midnightscar17 chapter 68 . 6/11
Your still over killing the fangirl bullshit
midnightscar17 chapter 48 . 6/10
I still say ur over killing the sasgay fan girl shit with sakura she wasnt tht bad in shippuden. N honestly she couldnt understand her feelings for naruto. Im a narusaku fan. I hate sasuke and hinata. The ending was forced
midnightscar17 chapter 11 . 6/9
I think ur going a bit over kill with the sakura character bashing
midnightscar17 chapter 3 . 6/9
Ill agree she was annoying up until the time skip but u have to remember Kakashi didnt do shit to help his team become productive or proficient in anything so sakura never took things seriously naruto didnt get the help u actually needed no thanks to the academy teachers n sasuke was just a arrogant jackass
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