up to ch 23 there's nothing different than the original, author some words but the plot points end the same way EX naruto learns a bunch of Jutsu and Rasengan much earlier but still needs to use Kurama's strength to win

up to ch 11 there are no changes at all 0 this is a copy only author add naruto learning Jutsu but everything goes the same as original

it is great and portrays the characters well

to corny and to fast you could have used the tsunade fight as a way for love it felt to scripted for me other than that you did well

With the training naruto had had, sasuke should have stood zero fucking chance. The fact that he struggled so much basically means he's not improved at all.

Just to let it go as the manga you mess up all the jutsu.

Are this writing back from all the original only some change

nah not really believable as Naruto is a hell of lot better than in Canon. He should have been able to subdue Sasuke easier.

Fine with Kabuto though as he is around Kakashi's level

Good story

where is senju naruto with the update

You know… for an elite ninja(jounin), Yugito sure treat war like “What am I’m having for lunch later? Hmm…” very laidback and don’t give a fuck attitude. Not training as if her mortality is confirm. She won’t die. Whine for waking up too early. How is it these qualities of a elite ninja?

I hope you don’t take this the wrong way. I’m a screen-reader user. And I find this story too fast compared to your Nightfall. I may be wrong but is there any punctuation in this story compare to Nightfall?

I'll give you a credit where credit's due that was quite the twist and by the way congratulations nice way to get rid of the b****

Other than the increasingly frustrating poor grammar and lack of proper punctuatiom, the chapter was good, although the dialogue felt stiff.

next chapter pls