Reviews for Naruto the toad sages apprentice |
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![]() ![]() up to ch 23 there's nothing different than the original, author some words but the plot points end the same way EX naruto learns a bunch of Jutsu and Rasengan much earlier but still needs to use Kurama's strength to win |
![]() ![]() up to ch 11 there are no changes at all 0 this is a copy only author add naruto learning Jutsu but everything goes the same as original |
![]() ![]() it is great and portrays the characters well |
![]() ![]() to corny and to fast you could have used the tsunade fight as a way for love it felt to scripted for me other than that you did well |
![]() ![]() ![]() With the training naruto had had, sasuke should have stood zero fucking chance. The fact that he struggled so much basically means he's not improved at all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just to let it go as the manga you mess up all the jutsu. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are this writing back from all the original only some change |
![]() ![]() ![]() nah not really believable as Naruto is a hell of lot better than in Canon. He should have been able to subdue Sasuke easier. Fine with Kabuto though as he is around Kakashi's level |
![]() ![]() Good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() where is senju naruto with the update |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know… for an elite ninja(jounin), Yugito sure treat war like “What am I’m having for lunch later? Hmm…” very laidback and don’t give a fuck attitude. Not training as if her mortality is confirm. She won’t die. Whine for waking up too early. How is it these qualities of a elite ninja? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you don’t take this the wrong way. I’m a screen-reader user. And I find this story too fast compared to your Nightfall. I may be wrong but is there any punctuation in this story compare to Nightfall? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'll give you a credit where credit's due that was quite the twist and by the way congratulations nice way to get rid of the b**** |
![]() ![]() Other than the increasingly frustrating poor grammar and lack of proper punctuatiom, the chapter was good, although the dialogue felt stiff. |
![]() ![]() next chapter pls |