Reviews for Naruto the toad sages apprentice
midnightscar17 chapter 3 . 6/9/2016
Ill agree she was annoying up until the time skip but u have to remember Kakashi didnt do shit to help his team become productive or proficient in anything so sakura never took things seriously naruto didnt get the help u actually needed no thanks to the academy teachers n sasuke was just a arrogant jackass
Corevi chapter 6 . 6/6/2016
it's really painful to read.
Corevi chapter 5 . 6/6/2016
that grammar though... I hope it gets better.
Corey wright chapter 14 . 5/21/2016
Beautiful dtityline hope you can keep it up also please keep yuitoxnaruto
Guest chapter 26 . 5/19/2016
Sheets?
Where did the bed come from?
Jiraiya111 chapter 85 . 5/13/2016
if
Guest chapter 7 . 5/8/2016
whoa you described Ibiki as a scared man instead of scarred man _
now imagine that u will write scared man as a sacred man HAHAHAH
now that will be hilarious and sad
arinasution5 chapter 13 . 4/25/2016
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viktordragon17 chapter 98 . 4/9/2016
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missourijack chapter 98 . 3/27/2016
is this on another site
StoneTheLoner chapter 6 . 2/27/2016
Wow, this chapter was almost painful to read. You know those cheap and cheesy movies you see that are horribly scripted? That's what this chapter felt like.
StoneTheLoner chapter 2 . 2/27/2016
Look up what a comma is, and figure out how to use it. Well, that and periods. Sometimes a comma is needed but isn't there. Sometimes a comma is placed where a period is needed. And sometimes in places where a period is needed, neither a comma OR a period can be found. Run-on sentences galore... This is a tip I heard when I was younger. If you say it out loud, but can't get the entire sentence out in a single breath, than a comma or a period is needed. That's just a rule of thumb, mind you.
Leroy-San chapter 80 . 2/12/2016
Fuck! She lives...
Leroy-San chapter 79 . 2/12/2016
I reaaaaally hope Sakura dies
Leroy-San chapter 73 . 2/12/2016
That was a good way to resolve that little marriage crisis. Good chapter.
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