good start

great chapter. I also like how you develop naruto. I mean it's not like he's the strongest in a few weeks of training. no you develop him nice and easy.

I still think you need a beta.

So far, I seriously suggest getting a beta for this story. Your spelling, to kindly put it, is crap.

nice story

Well a nice story so far and I like how things are going so far. I think Jiraiya will take advantage of finding out Naruto's affinity and will get Asuma's help (even if it is by having Asuma send a clone to Naruto).

As for the Forest of Death, I think you should have it be Naruto and Anko versus Orochimaru. After all Naruto can run into a snake in the Forest and then go after Anko upon finding out it's a summon (hence why they are together), and then Orochimaru appears after having marked Sasuke with the cursed seal. This way you can have Anko and Naruto hurt Orochimaru a bit (maybe even causing him to miss watching the preliminaries).

As for the pairing, while I'm fine with the Naruto/Yugito, I wonder what it will take to convince you to go for a Naruto/Yugito/Fu pairing (Naruto with the two female demon vessels).

Anyways keep up the good work and I hope to read more soon.

haha poor naruto, having his new sensei say 'may not be such a dumb ass' in the first hout or so of meeting him xD

i think NarutoxYugito is a great pairing :)

sorry to be annoying but it's 'definitely' not 'defiantly' and 'does' not 'dose' i like the concept though xD

good stroy. I look forward to see more of it soon.

GODDAMN IT USE PROPER GRAMMAR.

Good fic well written and goood humor, hope to see more soon

good stuff naruto yugito 4ever please god no hina

I love the story. It seems that Naruto will be a strong enough Gennin, I hope that makes you train hard Jiraiya.

awesome