Reviews for Naruto the toad sages apprentice
RFDN chapter 3 . 6/21/2011
You seem to rush when writing your chapters which leads to some grammatical issues and left out words. You seem to have a good idea but I could see some room for improvement. You have a great option in the next chapter to do so.
macabre-wolf chapter 3 . 6/21/2011
sco23 chapter 2 . 6/21/2011
I like it. as for the pairings, how about Naruto and Kin, or Naruto and Hinata.
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