Reviews for Naruto the toad sages apprentice
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 72 . 3/4/2015
Smart way for Sai to get around that
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 68 . 3/4/2015
LOL for the whole conversation with the samurai about Naruto's plan!
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 67 . 3/4/2015
Nice ultimatum by Naruto to keep Danzo out of power.
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 65 . 3/4/2015
Really like this version of the talk, more thought out. Omitting the dog was a good idea too. I get how emotionally tied to it Nagato was, but most people tend to mock that part
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 60 . 3/3/2015
This Killer B is taking the situation a lot more seriously, which would have made sense in cannon if he knew Akatsuki had already taken Yugito
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 54 . 3/3/2015
Interesting point, given Jiraiya's use of a toad, he could conceivably had a bunch of ANBU waiting in one to call for back-up.
Liked the conversation amongst Taka about what they were doing now, lol.
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 48 . 3/3/2015
Good and accurate analysis of Sakura by Yugito
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 46 . 3/3/2015
LOL that Chojuro gets points for *surviving* Naruto’s attack. Makes sense in context, but still funny.
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 40 . 3/2/2015
Enjoyed Sasuke's reaction to Rasinshuriken a lot! Also interesting point for how Karin reacted to seeing Naruto, I had forgotten that scene. Makes me wonder about all those other scenes in fics where she meets him the first time and why she did not react similarly to his positive chakra.
Kudos for making Chojuro 3rd, easy for people to forget that he *is* a 7 Swordsman
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 27 . 3/1/2015
Liked this chapter for both the Raikage’s reaction, and the permanent presence of builders, but also the meeting between the Akatsuki LOL. On a more serious note, good job on making clear why Nagato is the figurehead leader here given how S-ranked ninja react around him
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 18 . 2/28/2015
Good idea of using the time-skip to train Naruto at a place no one can reach. Even safer than wandering around to throw off pursuers, and no worries about Jiraiya blowing off training to ogle at women :-P
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 14 . 2/27/2015
The speed of the pairing was a tad too fast for my taste. Also, you really should work on the grammar. Yes, you gave a warning, but seriously, if I had not read Nightfall already and know what kind of work you are capable of, I would have stopped at the first chapter or so to skip the annoyance of trying to get through all this
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 13 . 2/26/2015
LOL that was the second most beautiful response to Naruto meeting Itachi and Kisame!
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 11 . 2/25/2015
Interesting idea to have Naruto show his seal, to really drive home to Neji what he is trying to tell him
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 10 . 2/25/2015
LOL for the whole clothes conversation. Plus good for actually teaching Naruto how to fight a Hyuga. Also nice logic regarding what most fic writers do for Naruto's weight training
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