You know… for an elite ninja(jounin), Yugito sure treat war like “What am I’m having for lunch later? Hmm…” very laidback and don’t give a fuck attitude. Not training as if her mortality is confirm. She won’t die. Whine for waking up too early. How is it these qualities of a elite ninja?

I hope you don’t take this the wrong way. I’m a screen-reader user. And I find this story too fast compared to your Nightfall. I may be wrong but is there any punctuation in this story compare to Nightfall?

I'll give you a credit where credit's due that was quite the twist and by the way congratulations nice way to get rid of the b****

Other than the increasingly frustrating poor grammar and lack of proper punctuatiom, the chapter was good, although the dialogue felt stiff.

next chapter pls

I really don’t think naruto vs A was believable because naruto defeated pain with sage mode and pain took out an entire village so I think naruto would be stronger then A

Oh thank kami. I always like alive asuma

Ok after 18 chapters it becomes better or i just got used to it. But I’m enjoying it now.

This was so cringed lol
It turned into smut out of nowhere. Then main character’s brain turned from being a ninja into nymphomaniacs

This is like skimming the naruto series kind of fic eh

Punctuation has left the chat...
Wanted: Punctuation dead or alive...

Man reading this is bearable but if you use ff app to listen to this.. it sounded like a train wreck in the making. For exampleHi, my name is uzimaki naruto. What’s your name?”In ff app you hear is “himunameisuzumakinarutowhatsyourname”

It’s a 10/10 until Yugoslav gets the involved then it becomes a 3 maybe 4/10 at best

nice chapter man

Bruhhhh...

Great job dude, you somehow managed to make me hate Sakura even more. I'm impressed.