Reviews for Naruto the toad sages apprentice
KHARAKI TAKAN chapter 3 . 12/31/2014
Wow the grammar here needs work though was written so long ago doesn't really matter.

Good chapter.
KHARAKI TAKAN chapter 2 . 12/31/2014
Grand chapter.
KHARAKI TAKAN chapter 1 . 12/31/2014
Good prologue.

Just reviewing the chapters I haven't already done and a quick skim.
marquis.shax chapter 98 . 12/21/2014
I'd suggest Naruto Senju go back and read the story as he made at least one glaring mistake and that's the fact that Asuma never died at the hands of the Akatsuki (well he did die against Pein but was revived). also is this story staying on this profile or switching to the other?
marquis.shax chapter 85 . 12/21/2014
you know until now I didn't even realize that you've not once had Naruto shouting his little catch phrase of Dattebayo. I only noticed it now due to Kushina not having the Dattebane verbal tic lol
marquis.shax chapter 80 . 12/21/2014
lol gotta admit I DIDN'T see that coming as she never had the guts to truly do it in canon. To bad she's completely worthless I mean shit she's got no real knowledge of anything about Konoha ESPECIALLY not Naruto
marquis.shax chapter 78 . 12/21/2014
damn an here I was hoping you'd have Naruto humiliate Sasuke even more than he had previously done but I guess that'll have to wait till you've had Naruto gain complete control over Kurama lol
marquis.shax chapter 72 . 12/20/2014
rasenshuriken right up Danzos ass I'm sure he'd enjoy that kind of enema and even if he uses Izanagi to escape it can you imagine the mental trauma from experiencing such a thing? lol
marquis.shax chapter 68 . 12/20/2014
ugh you know I STILL don't understand how Sakura could "love" Sasuke I mean seriously she knew NOTHING about him only that he was "hot" and the last of his clan. It's not like he ever seriously tried to become friends with anyone and talk about shit especially with his fangirls like her the closest to having a friend he had was Naruto an that wasn't even much of a friendship lol
marquis.shax chapter 67 . 12/20/2014
I see you upped the number of Sharingan Danzo has from the original 11 or 12 to around 30 that definitely makes it difficult to deal with him while using Izanagi lol. I'm actually kinda shocked that when Danzo first got Shisuis eye that he didn't use the Kotoamatsukami (not sure if that's the proper name or spelling lol) to get Naruto into his ROOT as at that time Naruto was just starting the academy and still fairly unpopular and with the control that genjutsu allows Hiruzen wouldn't have cared what happened to Naruto although I seriously wonder if some of the other writers don't have a point in the fact that a seal like the one Danzo uses or snake pedos curse mark wouldn't last on Naruto due to the Kyuubis chakra
marquis.shax chapter 66 . 12/20/2014
hope he gives Danzo the ass kicking of a life time lol
marquis.shax chapter 56 . 12/20/2014
pretty interesting twist on the story of the sage. Most unique I've read so far at least. But sadly it's quite wrong although I'm sure you knew that when writing this as you just wanted to put in your own spin lol. sadly the parts of Uzumaki and Senju being related to the bastard Uchihas are true as Uzumaki and Senju used to be one clan but then broke off.
marquis.shax chapter 47 . 12/20/2014
lmao Konoha has the ultimate weapon against the dojutu users in the horrible genjutsu of Lee and Gai. Hell if Lee had been around at the time of the 3rd war then Minato wouldn't have been needed just send out Gai and Lee to the front of the battlefield and have them put up that genjutsu and everyone will run away in fear
marquis.shax chapter 43 . 12/20/2014
hmm I hope you elaborate in a later chapter what you mean by new object of her desire while talking about Hinata as I thought she still liked Naruto did she meet someone during the exams? Also it would be kinda awesome if you changed your mind later an got Naruto together with Hinata and Mei an just have all 3 women enjoy him and each other lol
marquis.shax chapter 41 . 12/20/2014
lmao you know I think Sasuke must've ignored his history lessons while in Konoha otherwise he'd have known that a Senju can also kill an Uchiha as Tobirama killed Izuna and Hashirama killed Madara (well history books say he did as nobody, not even Hashirama knew Madara survived but was severely crippled after their fight)
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