Reviews for Naruto the toad sages apprentice |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wasn't Asuma alive in this fic so far? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is so good I wish it didnt get finished. It said the rest will be written by Senju Naruto but that was years ago and when I went to his profile he doesn't have it uploaded like he never continued so sad :(. Maybe I have the wrong profile and they changed names someone please let me know! |
![]() ![]() Filler just gives me more details on there relationship so I'm loving it |
![]() ![]() Not once so far would I have changed a thing |
![]() ![]() ![]() naruto does not kill! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That fight was a massive cop out. Even after all the training naruto has done in this compared to the anime, even after beating sasuke, you just have kabuto show up to take sasuke anyway. It seems like every author always wants to follow canon when it comes to stories like this, while trying to play it off as new and original with their own twist. You could have done so many things, could have had him executed, stand trial, shit even redeem him with the curse mark affecting his mind, but you still sent him to Orochimaru. This sounds like a flame, I know, but its really not, up until this point the story was decent, it had its flaws but what story doesn't, this was the part though for me that makes it canon with sprinkles. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahh yes, the ultimate technique, the Talk no Jutsu! |
![]() ![]() ![]() still always wondered why they never just reversed summoned jiriya right before he died |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope for update soon. |
![]() ![]() you made naruto way stronger than canon yet you make him weaker than he was in canon fighting pain |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would definitely recommend this story to anyone, it’s truly very good. I like your twist on Naruto’s strength after the time skip, I honestly would of preferred yours over canons. The only thing that I would criticize is how you never got around to finishing the war ark. With that said I can see it being hard to make it different then canon. Any ways good story! Definitely recommend. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey I thought Naruto saved asuma sarutobi in you fanfiction, then how can he be a edo tensei? |
![]() ![]() Yes Sakura must die |
![]() ![]() Good so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story as well as all of your naruto work! |