Reviews for Naruto the toad sages apprentice
Shadowhunter36 chapter 4 . 3/2/2020
This has overall been a good book so far but maybe do some editing for some grammar mistakes also making time skips more noticeable as well too?
Ricardo Soto chapter 17 . 2/14/2020
Honestly I see hardly any worthwhile differences in your fanfic your basically copying cannon completely with minor unimportant differences like naruto being stronger but even then still doesn’t change the events and the poor excuse of romance with Yugito. Theirs no build up in the romance they immediately fall in love barely knowing each other. Just seems you care about making smut out of their realtionship then actually making it meaningful. Sorry but just the truth
midnightscar17 chapter 7 . 2/2/2020
I always found it annoying that Tsunade never promoted naruto after returning from the time skip to at least chuinin.
shyamal.10000 chapter 87 . 12/16/2019
I know you haven’t updated this story in over 5 years but since the original Naruto manga/ anime series and Naruto Shippuden manga/ anime series have been completed I was actually hoping that you come back and finish this fanfiction story all the way to the end of the Fourth Shinobi World War and may be even to the start of the Boruto series but with obvious differences like Yugito surviving (not having her tailed beast extracted), marrying Naruto and having children with him. I am saying and asking this because I have never seen a fanfiction story this realistically similar to the main canon storyline but so different at the same time and all of the filler chapters are not overblown, oversimplified and dragged out. In fact the way you fit in the filler chapters in between the main storyline chapters was actually perfect. I saw no flaws or errors whatsoever (except from the grammar and spelling mistakes). I really would like to see this fanfic completed. It would be such a shame if you left your story like it is right now. I was also hoping that you go back and fix ALL of your spelling errors, although it will take a long considering how long the story is.
Lord Vaserious chapter 1 . 11/7/2019
I like it.
Sin Danimal chapter 98 . 11/3/2019
Is this being updated here or on senju naruto's page cause I just looked there and didnt see anything
Cranky Monkey 699 chapter 2 . 8/28/2019
Ok you seem to consistently misspell a word here. It’s DOES not dose. Context being he does 600 laps of Konoha on his hands. Not he was so high after a dose of heroine he THOUGHT he did 600 laps
UzuUzuUzu chapter 2 . 6/1/2019
in the first chapter Jiraya says Naruto has a lot of hidden talent now he says he got none! Jiraya isn't the nice guy who would train the worst performersunless they are a genius in hiding. Naruto was only taught because of the fox and the connection to Minato. Even then he scammed and neglected Naruto for two years leaving a Naruto who didn't learn anytging new besides a bigger Rasengan. With his shadow clone learning he should have become a walking jutsu library within two years
UzuUzuUzu chapter 2 . 6/1/2019
Shadow clone is an À rank jutsu, not a B rank one
Prayag Raj Rai chapter 10 . 5/31/2019
Jeez you said the few chapters were bad so i thought its just grammer or story progression but here you almost copied full anime episodes. Jiraiya being there from the graduation should've changed a lot of things and sai should be better than other genin cuz he is from root and they start going in missions before others enter the academy.
I hope you change this soon.
Wookie of Magic chapter 98 . 5/23/2019
Well first... Update please! Second Asuma is supposed to be alive so having him be resurrected is impossible lol.
Guest chapter 15 . 3/30/2019
urghhhhhhhh, jsut when i thought i find a fanfic so good only to be ruined by this bad shit romance smut kinda thing. I mean romance it good but the way you wrote the two mc is so unrealistic especially for naruto being 12-13 year old who supposedly just started having feeling of intimacy with other around his age.
wait what chapter 14 . 3/30/2019
This one just hit me at the back of my head, didn't see this coming. and wtf is that super fast paced romance. You just killed me off with this shit. It would have been better to take the romance between the two slowly. like get them to be intrigue with each other for a while, then they meet again unexpectedly, something happened in the mission that they ended up relaying on each other kinda stuff. The way you did it makes the really good fanfic into a smut where the mc is so thirsty for each other.
brutusjr chapter 21 . 2/3/2019
in 90% of these stories Gaara always loses Shukaku. Why follow canon so much?
xnzqwmaxdsra chapter 1 . 1/22/2019
please updateee .
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