Reviews for Osculate
Guest chapter 5 . 4/18/2012
I have no words.

This is perfect.
HollyVanDerBerg chapter 5 . 7/30/2011
Awwwww. There really is nothing else I could say but CUTE

Same username btw

Well done!
XxXRegretXxX chapter 5 . 7/29/2011
Hello! Thanks for entering the competition! I wish you the best of luck!

This was really cute! I usually don't like next-gen, but I loved your characterization of Victoire. You definitely gave her plenty of personality.

Excellent job! Keep writing! :D
chipzixo chapter 5 . 7/28/2011
Really, really, really cute. Before I go further, let me just say, the 'Skyway Starcatcher' is a brilliant name for a broomstick.

Anyway.

I liked this story. I liked how Victoire was confident and the quote about being loud enough to hear, and I liked her first kiss with Teddy. Her shy little boyfriend was cute too. Not the second one, though. He was a git.

In my opinion, I don't think that you should refer to yourself as 'I', as the author. I'm sure there are people that do, but I, personally, don't like it - that is, unless you're a specific narrator. Lovely ending, though, with the wedding :)

All in all, it was sweet :) Well done, and good luck in the competition! x
gimmeachancetofly chapter 5 . 7/27/2011
Beautiful, lovely, splendid ending!
gimmeachancetofly chapter 4 . 7/27/2011
Yay Teddy! That was adorable! :)
gimmeachancetofly chapter 3 . 7/27/2011
Aww poor Victoire! Guys can be real douches sometimes :P
EssaTheTwerp chapter 5 . 7/26/2011
Wonderful, Ember, just wonderful. Amazing, really. :) You will be published one day, I can garauntee it.
EssaTheTwerp chapter 4 . 7/26/2011
Amazing! I'm a V/T supporter for life!
EssaTheTwerp chapter 3 . 7/26/2011
This saddened me, but it was realistic and very well written. Good job, bb. :)
EssaTheTwerp chapter 2 . 7/26/2011
Awwn, so sweet! I really do love it!

Did I tell ya that I joined HPFC, too? It's super fun, definitely!
EssaTheTwerp chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
Wonderful first chap, hun, sorry I didnt rev earlier! :)
gimmeachancetofly chapter 2 . 7/26/2011
Awww that was so cute! Please update soon!
Chioryo chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
Amzingly adorable twin twin. lol. I always love your stories. 3
Melodiux chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
This is so cute!
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