|Reviews for I Heard a Man Sing|
| Mystery reveiwer chapter 3 . 9/5/2015
Please please continue I know it's been a while but this is one if the best spuffy fics I have ever read.
| iloveSpuffy chapter 3 . 8/28/2012
Please continue ?
| Saving People Slaying Things chapter 3 . 8/24/2012
| rranne chapter 2 . 7/15/2011
The Tara thing has potential. Go with it.
| rranne chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
Hi, I don't usually review anything that I read, and this is for a reason. I am very critical. So first I will say I liked it and kudos for the effort, I am an aspiring writer myself so I understand how hard the process actually is. Second on a purely personal note, my vision of how this scene played out involved Buffy running from the church in terror when she realizes that all of this was done because of her, and she really cannot deal with that since she hasn't quite come to grips with the fact that she actually does love the stupid git yet with all the denial of seasons six and seven. Later she wonders to herself if he was alright afterwards because she does not see him again for a while and feels guilty about that as well- my take on it anyway. Third, this starts the critical part, the part that I both want and dred when I will soon post my own very first post; I think your characterizations were ever so slightly off, it was a short piece, so it is both very hard and very crucial that the characters are believable as themselves- I can't offer any suggestions as to how to fix this, it may pull itself together in a longer piece. It reads a little dry, by that I mean, it did not pull me into the story- writing a little more in the first person would help this, not all the time but interspursed with narrative would help in drawing the reader in. The best things I've read are where the author has drawn, lured, or better yet, sutlely yet forcefully adducted me into their world and I am really there, if you know what I mean. Running out of space, but I will be back, later. rranne