|Reviews for Arthur is Dead|
| Stuch chapter 3 . 8/7/2011
Don't worry too much about the pace, a slow-burn start to a murder mystery story is perfectly acceptable. Plus this is a very interesting read and worth doing right with a steady set up.
One thing is to be careful with your tenses. There were a few slip ups in chapter where you wrote in present tense instead of the past. But this is good, can't stress that enough.
| Epic-Azn-Failure chapter 3 . 8/6/2011
How nice of the bleeding man. :) Great chapter. Hope you update soon.
| katBrite chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
This was awesome, really well done! It really caught my eye and kept me really interested throughout! well done, hope to see more :)
| musicchica10 chapter 2 . 6/29/2011
Oh wow, great chapter. I hope that Arthur is still alive and that Ariadne will find him...Can't wait to see what happens! Hope you update soon!
| Epic-Azn-Failure chapter 2 . 6/28/2011
Yay, there is hope that Arthur is alive. Great chapter. Hope you update soon.
| WorriesAreForSquares chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
Really great chapter! it was interesting and really brought me into the story! If you need a beta i'd be happy to help.
| Laura.Is.A.Dreamer chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
Very intrigued! Can't wait for an update!
| Epic-Azn-Failure chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
Great start. My this was intense. Hope you update soon.
| I Just Need You chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
| musicchica10 chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
Oh great start! Grabbed my attention and had me on my toes. I do hope that Arthur isn't dead, and that it's just bait for her...hope you update soon and I can't wait to see what happens!