i loved the whole thing! how danny was reading frankenstein to how he revealed his secret. hope u write a sequel to how jack finds out! (must be pretty long, then) :) XD :P :D

This was so freaking fantastic! Thank you for writing!

Oh my gosh the summary betrays how great this story is. I've been on this fandom for like 2 years now? And I've never even given it a second glance. But actually reading it is something else altogether. It's beautiful, exciting, and well written. I wish that I read it sooner.

Btw I have an idea for an interesting plot twist. What if vlad managed to get out of the thermos and use the net that the Fentons created on Danny?! And keep in mind that this would take place before Danny and Maddys late night convo. So she would still be unaware and kind of hate phantom. And once vlad captures Danny and maddy they would be trapped together with Danny learning to be vlads apprentice. I think it would be sort of interesting... but idk what would happen next.

Your ending is amazing btw. The idea that maddy would give their invention as a peace offering is really cool :D

Yassssss!

okay, great story, but seriously, what's gonna happen to the froot loop?

Wow, that was amazing! I can't stop grinning. Thank you very much for the story!

I just read this whole thing and now I'm leaving a review. This was so amazing. I love the pacing and the little moments where Maddie sees the "human" side of Phantom are perfection. I would love to see a sequal to this about what happens with Jack and Vlad. I do understand that this is your first story, though it doesn't read like it, and it's been a long time since you've written it. So no pressure. Overall, I greatly enjoyed this well written fic.

"Plasmius," he growled. "I swear I'm going to kill him for this. And I suppose he's also the one letting the Box Ghost out every two minutes?"

"I…" Skulker paused. "No, actually. None of us can quite figure out how he does that."

THe hesitation in Skulker's answer! XDD I can definitely imagine the box ghost constantly getting back out lolol; I had to take a break like at least twice bc these lines were too funny xD

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i know this is from 2012, but i just want to say how well written it is. it has just the right amount of build up, good pacing, and everyone is in character. good job on this one, i really enjoyed it!

cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee and amazinggggggggggggggggggggggggggg i want a part two this rules great job

Lovely lovely story!

I love revelation fics like this. You showed quite well that Maddie just can not make the right leap in logic to connect the dots properly. That is, until her nose gets rubbed into the obvious. Another thing I like was SamJazz vs Danny. Although you didn't really show what the said/did to him, when they work together he doesn't stand a chance against them.

Great job here, even though I only found it today, I find that it is still a good piece.

This story is amazing thank you so much for wrighting this story I really appreciate it (-)

I liked the park theme in your story! I never realised Danny might use a duplicate to stay in school for him and fight minor ghosts while he himself used his time for other things. It's fun to think about.
Does Danny only use his duplicate to sit out his detentions while he fights ghosts? Or does the duplicate also fight ghosts for him and he takes some time off himself?
Aside from that another thing I liked was Danielle's role. I'm a sucker for family like interactions between Danny and Danielle, and simply love the girl, but her presence was also an important key in Maddie's reasoning throughout the story, and the reasoning made sense. Sometimes Maddie's reasoning in stories feels kinda bland because she has to be kept in the dark for the story to play out nicely, but Maddie's reasoning felt honest, especially right after the battle with Vlad.

Also, thanks for the lighthearted ending. It felt right. It left me with a smile on my face and hope for the characters' future, and with all the angst that goes around in this fandom, I'm very grateful for it.
Thank you for writing this story!