|Reviews for For His Own Sake|
| Wittmann the Tiger Ace chapter 20 . 11/24/2012
This is a good story BUT! Does anyone in this story have any redeeming value or quality? Are they all so very empty? I feel that everyone is on novacaine and numbness has set in. Wow, or to quote Shakespeare "What fools these mortals be."
I'm addicted to this story though it is deeply disturbing as it is creepy.
9.5 out of 10.
P.S. Forget my other reviews because I guess I'm a masochist now.
| major wallace chapter 20 . 11/23/2012
| Hektols chapter 20 . 11/23/2012
Mutsumi has to learn that there is a difference between being nice and being naive to the point of trusting more a pair of persons she just met ignoring what a more experienced woman as Haruka told her.
Agree with Tsuruku also not being seen fit for the title due to the way she manipulated things.
It would be nice if Naru was introduced to her younger sister and have the little girl asking why she hates her to the point of not wanting to live with her family.
| raveman2 chapter 20 . 11/23/2012
Wow I'm loving this story so far. All the confrontations is great. Really looking forward to seeing more. I wonder if there are other stories like this on the site.
| Luffy is King chapter 20 . 11/23/2012
Two things I have to said. One for neo-byzantium if what you said had happen it would end quickly because motoko has a backward way of thinking so if she did take over she would lose without lasting for long as she would use old fashion equipments and ideas and with modern technologies other have she can't win. The second thing during haruka and mutsumi argument I'm surprise mutsumi didn't said that hina also believe Keitaro is being influence and that haruka when telling her she is being naive, she(haruka) didn't pointed out that mutsumi believe that the promise help heal naru and instead it was actually surgeon what got her better in the end.
| Neo-byzantium chapter 20 . 11/23/2012
I'm glad that Keitaro has begun his chat with Aunt Marumi and his cousin Yoshinari. Hopefully, they can mend the rift between them formed by Keitaro's naive outlook on life and Granny Hina's moronic influence. /sighs/ Keisuke Urashima would be saddened to see how much emotional and physical damage his daughter's been doing with her stupidity...
In regards to Naru, I have a feeling that the situation involving her and her family will be resolved soon on way or the other.
With Motoko, I'm saddened to see that her own parents and sister won't even speak to her but it's her own fault I'm afraid. Also, she's dragged her sister Tsuruko down with her as she won't be heir to the God Cry School either thanks to Motoko's actions. The idea that Motoko would make all the female students militant and anti-feminine while barring males from being a part of the school is dead on. It seems to me like she wants to create an all female samurai army that'd end up becoming a terrorist group dedicated to taking over Japan and creating a medievil society where women rule and men are treated like crap. I'm probably being paranoid about the last part but she'd certainly turn the God Cry school into a women only club that bashes men.
In Su's case, she's on thin ice and I'm annoyed with her but I still hope that Amalla gets to her before the authorities do.
With Mutsumi, I'm getting really pissed off at her stupidity. Haruka told her what Chisato and Kagura were really like but she refuses to listen to her, someone she's known for quite a while and instead, clings to the idea that those two harpies have changed. How could she ignore Haruka's advice like that? Is she as caught up in her delusions as Granny Hina or something? I hope that someone or something can burst her bubble pretty damn soon.
Finally, I wonder what Shinobu and Nyamo have planned? Something good no doubt.
Keep up the good work.
| DragonGod926 chapter 20 . 11/23/2012
Good chapter. Now, as to the source material. What many fail to remember is that Love Hina is a "harem comedy" manga, it's not meant to be true to life or read into much. But it, along with others of this genre; such as, Ranma 1/2 and Tenchi Muyo, are because we, as fans, psychoanalyze the Hell out them and put our own interpretations for the characters' actions and personalities. Which may not even be correct since we are not the mangaka. I think Aoi Yori Aoshi is the only "real life" take when it comes to the harem genre, but even that has its moments of classic harem comedic misunderstandings and whatnot.
| rst64tlc chapter 20 . 11/22/2012
And Mutsumi just digged down into a whole new level of stupidity and Naru meets her dad, what will happen? Chisato, Mutsumi, and Kagura better not do anything to Shinobu. Great Chapter.
| Rialga chapter 20 . 11/22/2012
Damn, Mutsumi just doesn't seem to give up on her delusions. I hope she gets snapped out of that mindset real soon. And it would seem that Keitaro is beginning to repair teh relationship with Marumi and Yoshinari. That's good, I hope it goes well. And wow, with Nyamo arriving, I just wonder how she will impact the story.
Looking forward to the next chapter and have a happy Thanksgiving.
| Luffy is King chapter 20 . 11/22/2012
At first I was angry that Ken made made such a bad story, but now we all should be glad about it because of what Ken wrote we can enjoy this masterpiece am I right or what?
| OBSERVER01 chapter 20 . 11/22/2012
| triviatrap1982 chapter 20 . 11/22/2012
Okay, I have a few points to make:
1. I am not surprised that Hina still is making excuses for Su and Naru.
2. Keitaro is definately manning up and making right with Yoshinari and Marumi.
3. Mutsumi is beyond deluded if she thinks that Chisato and Kagura are who they say they are.
4. Haruka was justified in firing Mutsumi, and banning her from the grounds...unlike an Alternate Keitaro Urashima, she actually was justified in firing an employee this time.
5. I'm thinking that Mutsumi should get a reality check by Shinobu. That is, even Shinobu would admit she wasn't the greatest of friends, but is trying to make right.
6. I am thinking that the only way Su is going to stay out of prison is if she co-operates. That is, she may well flip on Hina...though she's still going to be punished.
7. Sarah now needs to remember she's not at the Hinata Inn anymore, and it was never acceptable for her to kick anybody in the shins.
8. I expected Motoko to be disbarred from being an heir to the Shinmei Ryu school. As for Tsuruko, that was actually a bit surprising. However, I understand how that had to happen.
9. I'm thinking that there's a possiblity that group photos possessed by Su would have Hina clipped from them, and being very noticable (also from Shinobu and Keitaro probably).
This is a very intimidating chapter. I am very much beliving that somebody will get to Mutsumi before it's too late. I am also very much aware that Su, if she gets caught better hope the JSDF, and the NPA are in a mood to deal. Finally, I believe that Keitaro, Marumi, and Yoshinari would reconcile.
| Samhan chapter 20 . 11/22/2012
I got few questions:
1-What is Nyamo doing here?
2-What Naru's father story?
3-What will happen to Mutsumi, Su, Sara, & Motoko?
4-Who's Kyoka Mitsurugi? Is she's really going to be Kanako's friend or something worse!
5-What about Nagisa?
| Pyromania101 chapter 20 . 11/22/2012
Trouble's brewing. Mutsumi is so stupid; she needs to get her head out of the clouds, otherwise she's gonna get hurt. I wonder who the man Naru ran into is. He'll probably give her a hard time, or at least call her out on her bad behavior. Either way, let the drama unfold further! Happy Thanksgiving, and good night!
| Luffy is king chapter 19 . 11/14/2012
I have created a community where you can read this story and other that have the high standard and none of the flaws you have seen in different fanfictions.