Reviews for Fireworks and Sugar Sprinkles
chasingafterstarlight chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
Erin, this is amazing!

I love the word you made up (or did you?) mystenigdrum, ahha. I love your Lily, she's so different than other Lilys that I've read- and the force-of-nature Lily that I write.

"but he doesn't understand

she's happy in he d"

I adore this part :)

Lovely job on this one- saw no grammar errors or anything of the like, and though I despise the pairing, it didn't bother me this time :)

Great job!
lowi chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
Erin, I loved this!

This freeverse was absolutely wonderful! I think your capture of both Lysander and Lily are great, their personalities was shown in an amazing way!

In a way, it was very sad, "but he doesn't understand

she's happy in he happy living two lives."

but that made it so much more believable, I think!

My absolutely favourite part was: "that's a mystery wrapped up in an

enigma encased in a


That was so creative, and really cool done!

Well, this was simply amazing, great work!
gooseberrie chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
Another beautiful freeverse. I seriously don't know how you do these things? Loved it! :)
chkn chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
I really like this, Erin! Especially the use of my old penname, which does indeed relate to Lily Luna in a way I never really considered. Maybe we're more alike then I first thought.

Great characterisation, and it looks pretty! Top effort! :)